A Dance Poem by Jolanta Gradowicz

A Dance

Rating: 3.9


Could I ask you to dance, madam?
Let’s go to dance to this music.
You mustn’t be a lonely woman
When everything is so rhythmic.

Why do you lower your eyes?
Why do you blush and tremble?
I see disbelief on your face...
Your touch is timid and gentle.

I feel your heart beat like a bell.
You speed up though music is slow.
What happened, my dear dancer?
Is there a trouble or sorrow?

I ask you, but you keep silent.
I give a tighter hug to you.
What a dance! I love this movement.
I dream it will begin anew…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 10 September 2008

...a fine composition indeed...........10

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Janri Gogeshvili 24 April 2008

Beautifully. The reader feels a dance rhythm. Palpation of hearts also cannot remain lonely … in any way...

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Hazem Al Jaber 16 May 2007

lovely write.. sure you can ask whomever you want to do whatever you feel.. done well done.. yours hazem

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Marvin Brato 11 October 2006

Beautiful poem madam, I enjoyed it. Keep it up. Indeed you deserved 10.

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