A Chance Poem by lady grace

A Chance

Rating: 4.8


quiet and wondering
here I am with broken wing
can’t move... can’t breathe
alone again....

you and I never give up
to troubles coming everyday
we always smile to crisis that comes
after all... GOD guides our way...

we’ll never leave an empty place
a chance to dominate our hearts
love is filled with honesty
sincerity seen at first sight...

ocean’s floor never dries
always wet by our untiring love
excited lips and hungry moves
disturb the silence of the night...

i like the way you understand
the way you comprehend
the way you take in
no matter what…you’re all I ever need...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sanober Khan 08 November 2009

so beautiful and sweet, i loved it! !

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Sandra Martyres 08 November 2009

Lovely romantic piece with perfect imagery....10

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Akram Awadat 08 November 2009

fantastic poem lady grace, well done 10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 November 2009

like the way you understand the way you comprehend the way you take in no matter what…you’re all I ever need... relation is like trees which grow when we provide nourishment in the form of appreciation..love, , care and understanding and this is very basic essence of it. there is no room for any misuderstanding and one must bealways tolerent this is how it develops in big tree...well cone and good piece of an art....10 read mine...not easy.... i miss

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Akram Awadat 19 July 2010

deep meaning words i feel with it thanks

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Nalathai Vongjalorn 25 November 2009

Nice poem i loved it 10+

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Noel Horlanda 19 November 2009

ocean’s floor never dries always wet by our untiring love excited lips and hungry moves disturb the silence of the night... I love this fourth stanza, the lines are deeply etched in my mind and my heart. some sort of eroticsm, you think so? Take care...10+

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Aijaz Asif 15 November 2009

very beautiful and smooth write ma'am and you are genius in making feelings into words....i loved it, many many 10+++++ rgds asif

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Eyan Desir 08 November 2009

A very well written poem.... Well executed... 10s

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