Jayne Davies

Rookie - 150 Points (5th October 1960 / Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff)

A Better Place - Poem by Jayne Davies

Each single, silver strand of hair,
The way you smiled upon your chair,
I'm missing you from head to toe,
Your loving ways, your golden glow,
This heart now broken, I must hold,
Your heart was made of pure gold.
For many Angels walk this land,
I felt this as I held your hand,
I looked upon your peaceful face,
You left us for a better place.


Comments about A Better Place by Jayne Davies

  • Rookie - 150 Points Jayne Davies (4/29/2014 1:11:00 AM)

    Thanks x Glad you like it Jei Yu! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 5 Points Jei Yu (4/25/2014 12:45:00 PM)

    well penned. It really touched my heart. When I read it How I miss my grandmother. Nice! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 150 Points Jayne Davies (6/24/2013 1:01:00 AM)

    Thank you Patricia! So glad you like it! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,884 Points Patricia Grantham (6/22/2013 5:10:00 PM)

    A very beautiful write Jayne. This poem really
    touched my heart. As I was reading it bought
    to mind loved ones that had passed on. Lots
    of love shown in those words. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 22, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, June 22, 2013


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