961: Am Numb, No More Pain... Poem by Amit Biswas

961: Am Numb, No More Pain...

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Thought I was in pain,
But realized, I had none,
I was stung numb sometime back,
Nothing no more could leave me a crack,

The numbness hurt me for a while,
Thought I had lost something,
Realized, to loose I had nothing,
It was air or water that came and went,

In the beginning it had a fragrance,
The last part was a stench,
That stopped my breath,
Suffered, the lack of oxygen,

The air got to clear out,
Oxygen must flow again,
Life must come back,
To make me normal again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Dorn 29 March 2007

I know how it feels to lose that 'normal' feeling... you've described it well. Good write, Amit! Brian

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Catastrophe King 11 March 2007

Some people take pleasure... in doing this to others. Cheer up for oxygen is there... was always there... you just need to breathe! (sometimes we forget to breathe)

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Amit Biswas

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West Bengal, India
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