(3) Let´s Fly Poem by Luis Gil de la Puente

(3) Let´s Fly

Rating: 3.1


I´ve been working on one
And I can feel it strong
in my fingers.

I´ve got the right thread,
it´s windy,
it´s a clear winter morning,
and there is no class today.

I will feel your cold hands
While I teach you to let go,
To feel the air,
the blow, the whisper, loneliness.

And then the greyhounds will come and sit
To take a look at us

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pia Andersson 07 January 2007

I agree with Duncan; the atmosphere in this poem is amazing..You remind me of how important it is to live -not just exist and what joy there is in little things A beautiful poem from you. With love Pia

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Yufen Liou 22 July 2006

sometimes, the right thread may not be right, and when you want to fly a kite, you don't want to let it go; you want to hold it tight and see how it flies.

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Duncan Wyllie 08 July 2006

A very powerful write, a poem of strong feelings and amazing atmosphere, I realy enjoyed this one 10, without fail Love duncan X

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