3 Poem by andrew Diaz

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me + you baby
just tell me that youre all 4 it
no worries,
no lies,
let get the wine
to pour it
if your heart is broken
let me fix
your love girl
ill never mix it
for you iwould sing
im going to be with you forever baby,
might as well get the wedding ring 3
because thts the ticket, and ill love youand itll never go unless you open up the doorbut even then ill close itand stand infront of you so u can seethat my lovee is pure and its gonna last eternity
yours truly, chris diaz.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Dodd 07 February 2010

good but break up the long lines for astetic consistency because thts the ticket, ill love you and itll never go unless you open up the door but even then ill close it stand infront of you so u can seethat my love is pure and its..... keep it up you obciously hear things in a metred rhyme so whos the gilr? Caught her yet?

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