॰ Wäítíñg Íñ Thè Räíñ ॰ Poem by Menime Soul
॰ Wäítíñg Íñ Thè Räíñ ॰
Standing alone, watching the black clouds above,
Admiring you my dear & our days full of love.
I'm trying to search your face, i know you're right behind those clouds..
You calling out my name, i can still hear you so loud.
Don't know what's taking you so long,
you said you will return before it rains..
It's been so long since you've been gone,
and i'm still awaiting my chance.
To say those 3 words to you, my lips made countless prayers..
My heart yearns to hold you close and show you how much i care.
Somehow i knew, you lied to me,
i know you aren't coming back.
Many rain i faced, but never saw your face,
and you're all that now i lack.
But i guess you're so happy to be behind those clouds,
and watch me getting drenched in pain.
As i can still hear you so loud, calling out my name,
whenever it starts to rain....
i ran out of words...beautiful description of such deep feelings
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5/4/2024 4:50:24 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I like the third stanza: Don't know what's taking you so long, you said you will return before it rains. Its been so long since you've been gone, and I'm still awaiting my chance. And the lines: As I can still hear you so loud, calling out my name, whenever its starts to rain.... This is so tender and heartfelt. Every line is filled with sadness and happiness at the same time. This is perfect for someone that lost a special person in their life and are not able to pen the pain. I think you have done that for them. Hugs and kisses. xoxo. B.B.