ମିଳନ ର ରଙ୍ଗ- 22 (Milana Ra Ranga -022/Odia Poem) Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

ମିଳନ ର ରଙ୍ଗ- 22 (Milana Ra Ranga -022/Odia Poem)

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ତୁମ ସହ କେତୋଟି ମୂହୁର୍ତ୍ତ

ନିଶବଦ, ନିରୋଳା, ଲଗନ,

ଛାତି ତଳେ ଭରିଥିଲା ଶୀତ-

ଉତ୍ତେଜନା, ଶୀତଳ କମ୍ପନ ।



ତମ ସହ କଥା ଟିକେ ହୁଏ-

କି ନ ହୁଏ, ପାଖେ ତମ ବସି ।

କେଜାଣି କାହିଁକି ସାରା ଦିନ

ବିତିଯାଏ ପୂରା ଖୁସୀ ଖୁସୀ ।।

ମିଳନ ର ରଙ୍ଗ- 22 (Milana Ra Ranga -022/Odia Poem)
Wednesday, November 8, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: desire,longing,love,love and art,love and dreams,love and friendship,love and life,meeting
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A meeting with the soul mate, even if in a dream, adds colours to the life.
Before the limbs or lips or hands feel each other, the soul and the heart starts reading each other, feeling each other, getting into one form of existence. One lives for the other, dedicates all the desires just to keep the counterpart happy and eternally alive.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sonali Parida 11 November 2017

ତମ ସହ କଥା ଟିକେ ହୁଏ- କି ନ ହୁଏ, ପାଖେ ତମ ବସି । କେଜାଣି କାହିଁକି ସାରା ଦିନ ବିତିଯାଏ ପୂରା ଖୁସୀ ଖୁସୀ ।। lovely poem sir. 10

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D Priyanka Singh 13 November 2017

Yes I feel it is a unique love poem. Love your sense of appreciation.Dear mam.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 November 2017

Thanks Sonali for the nice remarks.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 November 2017

Thanks dear for your kind inspiring words, Sonali.

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D Priyanka Singh 11 November 2017

A meeting with the soul mate, even if in a dream, adds colours to the life. Before the limbs or lips or hands feel each other, the soul and the heart starts reading each other, feeling each other, getting into one form of existence. ତୁମ ସହ କେତୋଟି ମୂହୁର୍ତ୍ତ ନିଶବଦ, ନିରୋଳା, ଲଗନ, ଛାତି ତଳେ ଭରିଥିଲା ଶୀତ- ଉତ୍ତେଜନା, ଶୀତଳ କମ୍ପନ । Lovely lines. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 November 2017

Thank you dear for your nice inspiration in the remarks.

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Alina Kaikeyi 11 November 2017

ତମ ସହ କଥା ଟିକେ ହୁଏ- କି ନ ହୁଏ, ପାଖେ ତମ ବସି । କେଜାଣି କାହିଁକି ସାରା ଦିନ ବିତିଯାଏ ପୂରା ଖୁସୀ ଖୁସୀ ।। A meeting with the soul mate, even if in a dream, adds colours to the life. Loved reading this nice poem so much. 10++++

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D Priyanka Singh 13 November 2017

Yes dear Alina I feel it is a unique love poem. Love your sense of appreciation.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 November 2017

Thank you dear for your nice inspiration in the remarks. Thanks Alina.

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Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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