(11) Haiku / Senryu - Collection Poem by VINOD A K

(11) Haiku / Senryu - Collection

Rating: 3.3


1. ALL IN ONE, ONE IN ALL

Divine Confluence
To ocean rivers flow
Water finally

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2. CYBER CHARGER

Dawn at Dusk
Tiresome day refreshed
Someone comes online

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 08 May 2009

# 1 comes across really great

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 15 June 2010

‘Dawn at Dusk’ total U-Turn…Someone yea must come as the ambience is on-line…Masterly Mr. V. Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Sandra Martyres 08 August 2009

Nice ones Vinod...As one who loves reading and writing Japanese style poetyr...I must say both these are good.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 29 May 2009

Amazing 10+++

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Catrina Heart 11 May 2009

Hey! ! ! ! ! ! These were nice haikus written........You are better than me my friend wish to have my words turn out like yours! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10+++++++++

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Anjali Sinha 09 May 2009

wowwwwwwwww i really luvvvvvvvvvv vit you have now mastered this section of poetry too great keept it up A+++ and 10++ too anjali

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