1...The Past Is Calling Poem by Casual Diamond

1...The Past Is Calling

Rating: 5.0


I saw you
In the mirror today
Over my shoulder
Or at least
It looked like you
Anyway
It can be hard to tell
I guess
You've changed so much
I wanted
To look again
But turned away
I didn't want to face
Those feelings

I guess
I miss you so
And the times
We had
And I want
To tell you so
But
You've gone away
So many things
Need to be put right
But my words'll go dry
One sound from you and I'd cry

My beautiful girl
Beauty shines from you
Will you ever shine
For me again?
But no doubt
Your heart burns
Elsewhere
And I'm not sure
I could take anymore

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Original Unknown Girl 28 November 2008

Cleverly expressed using the mirror and as a reflection of the past. This is a highly evocative poem. Great writing. HG: -) xx

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Anita Atina 27 November 2008

Emotions from the past that still throb in the present, eloquently captured!

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