1) Nathaniel - The Disco Poem by Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello

1) Nathaniel - The Disco



This is the opening of a little poem. I'd be happy to offer it
to Poemhunter People. For now, accept it as admission of the universal value of the poetry.

A pub in the centre of a town on the sea.

Mirko:
Drink this tomato juice
If you remember
Another fluid, it's better yet
Peppered with salt and spice
It goes down well.

Nat:
I'm drinking, I'm remembering
But I'd like to know
What is this thirst-quencher,
I'm thirsty again:
Mother's act recalls
That of another woman.

Mirko:
Old women are for you
If you search sensuality
Where do you think you'll find it
If not old way?

Nat:
I'll follow you, you'll show me
But not that you'd rather.
Girls suit me and sensuality
Increases in power
Picking spring flowers.

Alone.

I'd like to enjoy
These girls. I wonder why
They recall me another women.

Exeunt.

(Winter 2007. Genoa, Italy) .

1) Nathaniel - The Disco
Friday, February 1, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: fantasy
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In his comment, Mr Arato writes that one can discover my poem's meaning "below the veil of strange verse".
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Desantis 28 April 2008

awesome work my friend, i love the competing dialogue. unique and different poem, allthough im not sure i got the full message as intended

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Franco Arato 22 February 2008

I really enjoyed Nathaniel' taste for the allegorical quest through a forest of nonsensical appearances... Of course, you have to pay attention to secret meaning 'sotto il velame de li versi strani' (to quote Dante)

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