! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1***eternity On Milieu! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1*** Poem by Dr subhendu kar
! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1***eternity On Milieu! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1***
gleams impregnable of fortress by heaven
yet glimmer through wings of immortality
as time and space in its mute undertone
smack of golden dusts raving over rays
distinction loses grace sucked in sweetness
green never ruffles insisting upon precision
yet eternity seals on its skin in ages and eons
perfection never meander being befuddled on window
as red simulates oblong on buoyant path of warmth
passion sates by beauty unflinching yet unfazed
truth dissipates illusion from miffed up mystery
crystals of transcendence beckons to glory of heaven
trust inflammable glows over dazzles of resplendency
as hued blue somersaults into thrills of ocean
dappled spumes resolute to hem in vale of tunes
love assimilates on the Elysian bay in unison
as when flattered on the altar of endearment
dream seems to redeems on virile pages of history
true soul bedecks of resilience by throes of breath
as ripples flow in solitude by buoyancy of intonation
yet mellifluous melody intones in assonance
beating of moment reels through speckles of red
beauty of truth blazes glory of Promethean fire
belief slowly beatifies in streams of penitence
love of innocence reels up in transcendence
now that took my breath away to feel it as you read it 10 from me.... graham
An intriguing poem about transcendence and virtue. Too abstract for my taste, but interesting... I feel that the highest art involves showing the transcendent and beautiful in the everyday events of our manifest universe. The extraordinary is to be seen in the ordinary. But that's just my view. Thanks for the invitation, Subhendu. Your work has freshness and originality, even though I think it should be more grounded. Let me know if there are other poems in particular that you'd like me to read. If time permits, please read any of these: 1. Beyond Loneliness 2. Communion With Pain 3. First Snowfall 4. God and Loneliness 5. The More and Emptiness 6. October Panther 7. You Gave Me Back To Myself 8. You Sit, Face Averted 9. Myth of Muslim Extremists in Jim Fractured
So hard a prose...yes....this is the way you are.......again a nice work....! ! Excellent! ! !
Tender ideas encapsulated in strong words.........Glorifies truth & innocence! !
Hello Doc, That needs a lot of visit to my personal dictionary, I am unfazed with all your blaze. All what I am left is to praise. Your critical appraisal will help me become a better poet.. regards, Azhar
nice try to make a poem so magificent, it's just that some parts don't make much sense to me
Hi.A GREat poem embedding things of concern, some words arent easy to me to comprehend.RHYming and much expressive.I most like d about it these lines they r amazing yet eternity seals on its skin in ages and eons perfection never meander being befuddled on truth dissipates illusion from miffed up mystery love of innocence reels up in transcendence
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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i have these kinds of understanding of the poem hidden between the word play! as a writer when you dance with the words only you can flow with them. as a reader i can never connect to ur truth but pick and choice what speaks to me i.e truth dissipates illusion from miffed up mystery xxxx