1,2,3,4... Poem by Roxy Gonro

1,2,3,4...

Rating: 5.0


Everyone thinks she's happy.
But she finds herself crying when she's in her room.
Tears fall one by one running down her cheeks,
1,2,3,4...
She cries because she's scared to be all alone.
Scared maybe she already is.
So she cries her heartout.
Cries til her eyes sting
Til she can't cry anymore.
Then she just sits, counting the dots on her tearsoaked pillow
1,2,3,4...
Til she can pull herself together.
Then she stands back up on her feet.
She knows it'll be okay because God's looking over her.
So she heads back into the world,
taking steps toward the door,
1,2,3,4...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stephen Magill 25 September 2009

great poem, i love the change in line length and rythm, its almost like counting, amazing write.

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Adeline Foster 24 September 2009

Roxy: Now that is a poem. How well you brought out your intent. And that numeric count is so apropos. Well done. Hope you read my Bloom Of Youth. Adeline

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Shannon Lasater 22 September 2009

i think this one is my favorite, i give this 1 a 10 also

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Sarwar Chowdhury 20 September 2009

this is finely penned dear roxy! 10+

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