[01] Enter Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq
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Who is walking at orange-noon?
Is a person, a living bonsai or a tiny moon
putting on master color dress?
Old sky is sending soft melodies
A smoothening smell of perfume
is following behind
As a delighted pet shaking soft tail.
I'm moving on and on keeping zero distance
Entering silently into the
core zone of a person
As a laser ray like an invisible ghost!
Poem 14
Book 'Beckoning Jade-Dreams' April 2007
Copyright Musharrat Mahjabeen
Mizan Publishers, Dhaka, Bangladesh
ISBN 984-8700-82-X
wow, what high a deep vision of imagery.....i like it... wonderful indeed.. when one wanted to enter in any game....event... relationship..even love... thank you....10/10... kept it on Ashraful
you not only enter a person, Ashraful, you take their soul with you and bathe and nurture it do divine childhood. this is a marvellous poem - 10 from me. Mark
Remarkable entry of soul's inner intent - As a laser ray like an invisible ghost! Just so beatiful. arya
A smoothening smell of perfume is following behind As a delighted pet shaking soft tail. Wow...what an imagination! ...10++...as usual...Brishti
IT SEEMS UR IMAGINATION TRANSCENDS THE BOUNDARIES OF THE HUMAN MIND...! ! ! : D
this has a surrealistic mood, good imagery, very original poem10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 7:20:54 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Great imagery of this, Ashraful! I am glad that i 'entered' this... 'the orange moon' 'a living bonsai' I add it to my favorites.