I really liked how you personified a promise and made it more as an imagery.
Moreover, the onomatopoeia used is also good.
Overall, I really liked it.
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I liked the slow move of the poem.
It is indeed thoughtful.
I even liked the word play and the punch lines.
Keep it up.
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