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  • Andrew Lee (3/26/2013 4:08:00 PM) Post reply

    Hey guys, check out this poem!

    Its All the Same by Julie Mcleod

    I think she posted something below not sure

  • Andrew Lee (3/23/2013 6:30:00 AM) Post reply

    Thanks! I tried to make it rhyme when i wrote it, but it kinda sounded childish if you know what i mean?Like a Dr Seuss book: / i dunno

  • Poopy Jones (3/22/2013 2:19:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    hi guys, this is my first poem, could you give me some feedback and pointers?thanks!

    My life used to fly so smoothly
    You boarded and higher I flew.
    But I've just hit a turbulent cloud
    I cant keep my mind off you.

    My brain is turning to stone, and thinking is getting hard.
    The silence is hungry, and it gnaws at my heart.
    But when I hear your " Goodmorning! '
    When I see your smile sweet,
    The sun comes out from behind that black cloud
    It lightens up my dark, so
    Even the night burns brightly.
    The world is my lamb chop,
    And I'm kinda hungry.

    Now, the sun soars across the waves
    When before, it was drowning.
    What was once a sad night
    Is now a beautiful morning.
    Yet wouldn't time have still trickled?
    The sun risen on its own accord?
    Dawn brings the morning, yes,
    But Tina

    You make it Good.

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