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David Mclansky
David Mclansky New York / United States, Male, 70
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  • POEM: Endless Love by Don Nguyen (10/11/2014 4:47:00 AM)

    Beautifully done, especially the last doue lines.

  • POEM: Rely not and rely by gajanan mishra (6/29/2014 8:11:00 AM)

    I see God within your eyes;

  • POEM: Introduction of my Love by Salim R Javed (6/5/2014 6:08:00 AM)

    Advice to the Poet Salim R Javid

    Don’t go advertising your beloved wares
    As if she was a fruit stand
    Many men with check her fruit
    To prove they are a man.

    Don’t go bragging about you love’s glories
    Speaking to the unlearned
    You’ll spark a fire in the curious
    And then who will be unburned

    Don’t go speaking of your loves curves
    As if she were Lexus
    The unlicensed with the uncivil nerve
    Will drive her off a lot in Texas.

    And don’t go speaking of her honeyed lips
    Those plums of bursting pride
    How many fingers will probe and dip
    As then try to get inside.

    The wise man hides his precious jewels
    From the voracious public eye
    All men are thieves with burglar tools
    Who covet beauties prize.

    I do not say to veil her face
    And make her wear a burka
    But don’t go bragging about your lover’s shape
    To a roomful of Viking berserkers

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