Dear Yash, you amazed me with this piece of art.. Never expected this kind of poem from a poet of this age. Very well expressed the emotions and problems of female with beautiful rhyming. You are a mature poet and i'm sure you have a bright future. Keep writing my friend.
This is lovely my friend.. Very beautiful and well expressed. Excellent portrayal of someone's love and comparison through nature. But this is how it works, life just goes on.. I enjoyed it.. Glad to see you back.. Good luck!
I request you all to read my new poem 'The Friend I Lost'
I wrote this poem for a very special friend whom i lost following few misunderstandings. But i really want her back..
I am sure you will relate this poem with you..