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Suzette Richards
Suzette Richards Somerset West / South Africa, Female, 60
Profession :
Accountant
Education :
Diploma in Human Resource Management
Stage
30 Points

Suzette Richards's last comments on poems and poets

  • POEM: On Your Pillow by Stevie Taite (9/25/2012 4:14:00 PM)

    A warm tribute to your spouse. I enjoyed reading this poem.
    Kind regards
    Suzette

  • POEM: Albatross by Suzette Richards (6/1/2012 2:20:00 AM)

    I wrote this poem in imitation of the rap culture (the use of the word jive giving a clue to this): with a mix of the old fashioned rhyming style of poetry. The tone of the poem was meant to irritate; hence the closing lines:
    I pull out the rusty nail
    of old doctrines which impale
    the coffin of my life.

  • POEM: The Desert Of Misery by Rick Elpers (5/30/2012 3:27:00 AM)

    Great use of metaphor. I would change the word tissues to the singular (flows better?) .

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