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  • POEM: Seed to a Latino dancer (the nurturing of young one in the womb) by Freespirit Juneja (6/2/2012 4:44:00 PM)

    Like somebody commented below, it's a captivating topic that pulls easily on our emotional strings. I like the poem, and I commend you for your effort. However, I'm a incorrigable simple person, and because of this I run into trouble with complicated words, or phrases, but that's just me.

  • POEM: Artificial Things (Sextuple Senryu) by Marieta Maglas (6/2/2012 4:10:00 PM)

    I like it. It's a good poem, and like poems of its kind, there isn't much to say about it but to relish the fact that it exists.

  • POEM: Heaven and Hell by Valerie Dohren (5/21/2012 2:44:00 PM)

    Epic. I like the journey you take above religious dogmas. It's always an uneasy one for some, and require courage on the part of others. Here is my other attempt at the same:

    Heaven
    Heaven is a temporary condition (forget you church)
    Phillip glass on my mp3 player,
    A bag of Studenten Futter,
    And a walk to the park in the early spring under a mellow sun
    Brings heaven down to earth
    I didn't have to die for it
    What a day, what a day
    What a sun, what a sun
    What a life, what a life
    Oh my, oh my

    Forget you church is originally fuck you church, and I apologize for being vulgar, but sometimes it just fits.
    Thanks for your comment

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