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Louis Cecile
Louis Cecile London / United Kingdom, Male, 36
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About Me : I have been writing since a young age and have always had a unique perspective of the mad world around me. My poetry is at its best when dark, but I can find moments ... more »

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  • POEM: Cry Of The Chrysanthemums by Kristen Brown (5/1/2014 3:01:00 AM)

    This reads very much like an interview and is cleverly used to provide the obvious twist at the end. A poignant write, where the sentiments grow from the words.

  • POEM: Cry Of The Chrysanthemums by Kristen Brown (1/22/2014 1:00:00 AM)

    The first poem has a more slower descent in pacing and ends strongly. However it appears to miss that something from the start, which is the direct opposite of the second draft. This starts strongly and gathers a quick pace, though the ending feels much weaker. A marriage between the two may help for what you wish to create.

  • POEM: Cry Of The Chrysanthemums by Kristen Brown (1/12/2014 1:06:00 AM)

    A poem where the meaning and tempo gather strength towards the end. A good write overall.

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