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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Ahmedabad / India, Male, 67
Profession :
retired
Education :
B.A(Arts)
Stage
8969 Points

About Me : I am an ex-serviceman from Indian Air force. I joined Oriental Insurance Company and retired from there too in May, 2007. I have been graduated from Punjab University. I ... more »

Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal's last comments on poems and poets

  • POEM: Drug war by hasmukh amathalal (10/22/2014 2:32:00 AM)

    It is open drug war
    Against drug dealers

  • POEM: Let us believe by hasmukh amathalal (10/22/2014 1:40:00 AM)

    We need no high rise building
    Only trust yielding

  • POET: hasmukh amathalal (10/21/2014 11:20:00 PM)

    MAGICAL TUNE

    cuckoo sings

    KR BALAKRISHNAN24 minutes ago
    Your poems are like cuckoo songs, so serene, lovely, musical... Bringing peace to hearts. Keep it up please.
    Comment +1
    Very good


    Seema Ali 27 minutes ago
    Your poem talks about the touch of? God in nature excellently.The way you have described the birds is great.Thanks for sharing.Brought a smile to my eyes.
    Comment +1
    Godly beauty for the bird that sings


    Robert Andrews21 minutes ago
    a nice piece about the cuckoo Ive never heard one If you have, read it and your review will be more accurate than mine.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal's comments on forums

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/13/2011 8:31:00 AM) Post reply | Read 2 replies

    'I and melody' addressed to friend about art and melody

    “Poetry is strong arm of an art”
    She asserted it with confidence to look very smart
    I had fined her interesting at the start
    I found her in tune with poetry touch and very much part

    I added mixture of both to form basic
    It looks then melodious and classic
    Where else was I to go and find?
    When Melody was always there to find?

    I was in mood to elaborate as she remained at heart
    The poems were right means and purest form of an art
    It was berthing and spreading fragrance all the times
    I used to enjoy it and smelt most of the times

    She was to complain that it was music in absence of tune
    How can you claim it flawless, without weakness and immune?
    I emphasized it to be divine melody
    It was not in the hands of anybody

    Art is always in pure form
    Only you should stay inform
    The love and art definitely are inborn
    In absence it may stand as if torn

    I told her to enjoy lovely evening
    Have full faith in art with clear leaning
    In end it was bound to be always winning
    As the rays are bright and shining

    I asked her to be always nice
    Stand firm in her promise
    Poetry should not face sudden demise
    As it is heavenly and divine device

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/16/2009 10:49:00 PM) Post reply | Read 4 replies

    I have till date abt 13 poems to my credit but find no comment on it. kindly may I reqyest all memebrs to jus pay an atention to the newly composed poems and offer critical comments if they worth to be on lines

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