I came to this poem at your request and I’m glad I did. I found it to be not only a delightful read but also a wonderful statement of faith. You have woven a wonderful fast meter and still maintained the integrity of blank verse. The poem captures the reader’s attention and holds it through the entire piece. Well done!
You messaged me to read this poem and I’m glad you did. I found it a delightfully profound read. You grabbed my attention right away with your deft use of epanaphora in S1. You have the gift of keeping your reader’s attention throughout the entire poem. Well done!
I thought this was you when I came here so I clicked on one of your poems. I'm not at all surprised to find something wonderful like this poem. I have read many casino poems but never one penned this well. The imagery took me right to the tables with you.