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Robert Louis Dummett Paris / France, Male, 66
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  • POEM: *A Humble Complaint* by Mohammad Akmal Nazir (5/2/2011 3:15:00 PM)

    Love the imagery you convey in your poem. Strong persuasive lines flow and have music which captures the sound of sense. Your use of metaphor is well developed, but you could have employed simile to enhance your verse. Moreover, your use of antithesis on the love front was crisp and punchy. Overall, I enjoyed this poem and thank you for sharing.

  • POEM: The Glory Trumpeter by Derek Walcott (12/19/2007 4:00:00 AM)

    A wordsmith paints haunting images.

  • POEM: xviii. Beautiful Talon by Igwe Kalu (11/30/2007 11:01:00 AM)

    Loved the poignant scene you painted with vivid word pictures. Your use of alliteration is well developed and there is a lovely smooth flow to your writing.

    May I suggest that you can improve your poem by leaving out the definite article, 'the' in the third and ninth lines as well as 'this' in the tenth.

    The piece is pretty solid and I thought the more of it, the more I read of it.

    All the best.

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