Critiques and Revision

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  • April Swan (my Diary Of Bitterweet Chocolate) (11/13/2012 3:13:00 PM) Post reply

    I need some critisism on some of my poems,
    nunn of none
    Rage monster
    The bottle of no pain

    I would feel better with some critism. Please help. Thanks! :)

  • Vikrant Jog (11/13/2012 8:09:00 AM) Post reply

    Hello all,
    I wish to improve my poems more... It has been while but please commenting with your precious advice...
    Thank You....

  • Rookie - 10 Points Aditya Mudbhary (11/13/2012 2:06:00 AM) Post reply

    Hello all,
    I have been in poem hunter for quite some time and now after some success here in poem hunter, I wish for all those critiques to have a read and comment for I wish to know what each of you think. Thank you and have a great day.


  • Rookie - 0 Points Toheeb Tiamiyu (11/10/2012 3:21:00 AM) Post reply

    Hello fellow poet, I humbly invite you to read my poems and leave a comment about them, would love more criticism dan praise.... And don't forget to vote... Thanks

  • Rookie - 0 Points Matthew Wilkinson Luck (11/9/2012 7:35:00 AM) Post reply

    To any and all who view this

    I'm new to Poemhunter and new to the concept of sharing my poetry at all.
    I would appreciate it if you viewed my poem " Teetering on the Edge" , or any of my other poems for that matter, if you could leave constructive criticism that would be

    So thanks in advance

  • Rookie - 0 Points Leonardo David Tay (11/9/2012 2:47:00 AM) Post reply

    Hey guys, I just posted a poem called, " If You May..." I would love to hear some opinions, either bad or good, I just want to improve. Thanks.

  • Rookie - 0 Points Søren Valentine (11/1/2012 11:13:00 PM) Post reply

    I would love for you guys to read my new poem
    The Unraveling

    and my poems entitled " Fallen Raven" and " Autumnal Love"

    Thanks in advance for your time!

    P.S. If you leave comments (which I hope you do, I want to get different opinions on my poetry) PLEASE be completely honest. If you didn't like it, tell me!
    That's why I want different opinions :)

  • Rookie - 0 Points Søren Valentine (11/1/2012 10:55:00 PM) Post reply

    Hi uh I'm sort of new to this...
    anyway please read my poem called " Confusion."
    lol most awkward post ever.

  • Rookie - 0 Points Shivani Misra (11/1/2012 12:31:00 AM) Post reply

    Hello people!
    Please read my 2 new poems
    1. With tears flooding my pillow.
    2. Within me.
    Thanks a lot. It would be lovely to receive your views through comments or messages. Thanks.
    God Bless :)

  • Rookie - 0 Points Joe Giuliani (10/23/2012 4:31:00 PM) Post reply


    Please note that my new book of poetry, " Dada Reborn: 21st Century Poems, " is now available on Amazon (Ebook) .

    These poems are intended for a mature liberal-minded audience.



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