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Marisa Eutsler Marisa Eutsler 18, United States (5/13/2014 8:11:00 AM)

Peer out my window
Look out just to see
Gone has the white snow
Its finally done chasing me.

Winter has disappeared
Sun in the sky
The bitter cold I much fear
I wave the icy flakes goodbye.

The ground is warm
Now the perfect soil
Bees buzz and swarm
My plan no one can foil.

The grass is green
Rivers at their flow
Birds chirping I’ve seen
Oh so quite does the wind blow.

Plant all the seeds
Water them good
The flowers have their needs
I smiled where I stood

For what I looked upon
Was the most beautiful sight
Tea whistling at the dawn
The blooms swaying in delight.

The heaven that I speak of
Excepts every single pardon
As lovely as the dove
For this is my garden.



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  • John Westlake Veteran Poet - 3rd Stage (9/16/2014 4:55:00 AM) Post reply

    Very nice and happy poem which is full of the joys of spring. Really liked this poem a lot and would love to visit that garden if I had the chance

  • Eesha Raaziah Naqvi Veteran Poet - 3rd Stage (7/16/2014 1:58:00 AM) Post reply

    I enjoyed reading it! very well-rhymed indeed. keep it up please!

  • Jerely Martinez Veteran Poet - 3rd Stage (5/21/2014 8:31:00 PM) Post reply

    very well written!
    i like this one :))
    Keep penning!

  • Marisa Eutsler Rookie - 1st Stage (5/19/2014 11:28:00 AM) Post reply

    oh yes i cant believe i misspelled that! thank you for your comment it made me smile :)

  • Rajkumar Panthoiren Rookie - 1st Stage (5/18/2014 1:26:00 PM) Post reply

    It sure is a warm, delicate poem. Very nice to read. The last part where you wrote 'Excepts every...' should be Accepts, right?All in all, Good job!

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