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  • Hannah Abbott (3/8/2012 12:56:00 AM) Post reply

    I have just written a poem and videoed it. You can find it on YouTube titled Passionately Purified and here is the direct link: http: //youtu.be/fjPhMheaMTM
    I hope you are blessed :)

  • Rookie - 0 Points John Hazon Palen (2/28/2012 9:32:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    I have written all my poems straight from the heart.. and I think it's the most important thing to have concern of..; ')

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    • Umul Baneen Brohi (3/11/2012 12:54:00 PM) Post reply

      You are right.Its important that we let our emotions flow straight from the core of our heart :)

  • Rookie - 0 Points William Blake Beckett (2/22/2012 10:40:00 PM) Post reply

    http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/man-in-the-sand/

  • Rookie - 0 Points Morgana Hale (2/18/2012 10:05:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Hi! This is a poem I wrote for a story I'm working on... Please let me know what you think!

    You hide behind a smile,
    You /act/ free of care,
    I see the fear in your eyes,
    On your face I see pain,
    I know I can’t help,
    It makes me want to cry.
    I love you,
    I always will.
    I see your pain,
    That emptiness,
    That just won’t fill.
    The scars on your past,
    Match the scars on my soul.
    With out the other,
    Neither is whole.
    Together, no act is needed,
    Together, no warning is heeded.
    Take my hand,
    Fellow forsaken,
    Do not act with me,
    Just be.
    When will you see?
    You and I are the same.
    I watch,
    As the day goes by,
    Know I am here.
    Take off The Act,
    You needn’t be strong,
    Weather you notice or not,
    Emotions are not wrong,
    My shoulder is here,
    For you to cry on.

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    • Silver2black TG (3/19/2012 10:49:00 AM) Post reply

      I love the style, It just needs 2 be a little more poetic and stronger, Other than that very GOOD Rhyming I love it! : D!

  • Rookie - 0 Points Colleen Dawson (2/15/2012 5:23:00 PM) Post reply

    Tis a poem: D

    Sorrow hanging high
    Kind of despare lost in the air
    Youndering beyond your place may end in sorrow and despare

  • Rookie - 0 Points Harshvardhan Ramachandran (2/11/2012 6:12:00 PM) Post reply

    Hello to everyone, I've been posting for 2 years, sporadically in 2009 and for a while in 2010 and have picked it up at the end of 2011 and into 2012. I have posted about 15 poems at the link below. Some of the old Poems might not feel too professional, The more recent work is pretty interesting, I hope you'll feel the same
    Any possible, feedback and critique will be most appreciated. I'd do the same if anyone needs some critique. Thank you.

    http: //www.poemhunter.com/harshvardhan-ramachandran/

    I also have a blog where I post more of my Poems, essays, articles and opinions, which is updated more regularly. Thanks for checking them out.

    http: //www.portraitofideas.blogspot.com/

    I write about Love, peace, equality, The Future, occasionally love and much more..

  • Rookie - 0 Points Chettur Aishwarya Shrivastav (2/8/2012 2:21:00 AM) Post reply

    http: //www.poemhunter.com/chettur-aishwarya-shrivastav/

    hey this is aishwarya shrivastav from India. i am a school going girl.. i have been writing, when i was 13 yrs. old...

    plz do read my poems and do comment..

  • Rookie - 0 Points Zibele Mrasi (2/7/2012 7:50:00 AM) Post reply

    I just started writting this year so I'm not really sure if I'm on point with poetry and I'm not sure which poems I like to write or who am I as a poet but I'm sure that you will enjoy one or two of my poems so hala at them and what I need the most is you comment thank you

  • Rookie - 0 Points ~Deana ~ Dotterweich (2/6/2012 10:49:00 AM) Post reply

    Hey Please check out my poems and post a comment/rate them... :) Please.

  • Rookie - 0 Points Sun And Moon (1/26/2012 7:09:00 AM) Post reply

    Hey Everyone!
    I am new to the site and I'd be really happy if you guys do me a favour and check out my poems on my page please!
    And tell me if they can be improved or anything :)

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