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  • Rookie ..... W@king Up..... (6/2/2013 2:48:00 AM) Post reply
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    Hi everyone
    Please would you both rate and comment on my poems?Thanks :)

  • Rookie Syed Mowla (5/17/2013 2:45:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    What do you think?

    Oath to dreams

    A soothing voice is hard to embrace
    When you feel undeserved of its grace
    The sweetness of her fruit is hard to taste
    From guilt embedded within your shame
    Lies upon lies built your heavenly estate
    For her to enjoy and believe that her fate
    Lie within your lies and truth distorted
    And reality is a scenery she surely hates
    So we sit and imagine a hopeful dream
    As dreams are surely better than what awaits

    Syed Mowla

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  • Rookie T.a Shabazz (5/16/2013 10:14:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Tell me what you think!
    Visions

    I close my eyes and invision a place where I'm in your arms and the world spins faster around us while we stay still. The rain falls down but we don't hear a sound. Not the war could tear us apart. The floor could break giving way to hell. But my eyes are still staring trapped in your gaze. You cast a shadow on me that makes me tremble with puzzlement. I feel safe. Your skin is warm and your eyes longing for something more. You whisper something that stops me dead in my tracks. I look and match your gaze as we lock and stare into relazation of each others souls for the first time.

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    • Rookie Fiona Schwartzinoff (12/31/2013 9:23:00 PM) Post reply

      You are quite talented. This is a powerful passage. I was expecting something cheesy and cliche. But you pulled it of great! My favorite part is the last line! :) Check out my poetry when you get a ... more

  • Rookie - 175 Points Vizard Dhawan (5/15/2013 11:20:00 PM) Post reply

    can you all read and comment on my poem
    anything for you my enemy
    autobiography and
    z131
    thanks

  • Rookie - 175 Points Vizard Dhawan (5/15/2013 11:08:00 PM) Post reply

    hey buddies
    earlier i used to write onl romance piece but gradually i have shifted my genre and tried something new which seem to be better.
    I think you should read my poems once and ponder over them
    do not forget to comment.
    thanks.

  • Rookie - 9 Points Srimayee Ganguly (5/15/2013 12:42:00 PM) Post reply

    I have a penchant for reading and writing. My elation and passions all lie in arts. I read in class IX and am the topper in English.

  • Rookie - 40 Points Angelo Prado (5/8/2013 2:16:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Hey people :) Love poetry but i think i'm kinda bad: (my friends says im the edger allen poe in our school but... Idk :) try reading something. I hope you like it :)

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    • Rookie - 40 Points Vizard Dhawan (5/15/2013 11:11:00 PM) Post reply

      hey angelo your words are awesome you are quite a wonder i love reading your poems now. do visit me too.

  • Rookie - 2 Points Ash-lee Massacre (5/4/2013 11:12:00 AM) Post reply

    Hey I'm Ash and love writing, however I don't know if I'm any good so if you could read my poetry on Suicidal Happiness and please let me know! ! ! ! !
    Thank you
    xo Peace Love
    Ash

  • Rookie Rabia Nadeem (4/30/2013 5:10:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Hi everbody....I am Rabia,18 years old.i have been writing for 3 years.English is not my native language but still I have recieved some appreciation recently.Please, read and comment my poems.I will respect your suggestions :)

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    • Rookie Vizard Dhawan (5/15/2013 11:18:00 PM) Post reply

      hey rabia your poems are just awesome so true and pure in nature yot have a blooming talent may god bless you

  • Rookie Sophia Engel (4/24/2013 8:09:00 PM) Post reply

    Hi
    I'm Sophia Engel and I come from Germany but live in Sydney
    I was wondering wether you could give me some feedback about my poems Of All People You Deserve It Not and Poverty
    Thank You! ! !

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