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  • Gaayatri Chandrasekharan (3/18/2013 4:25:00 AM) Post reply

    I am new to writing poems and love to write.Can someone please go through my poems, rate and suggest ways to improve?All your valuable criticism and suggestions will be appreciated.I will be very grateful for your advice.
    Thankyou! !

  • Zoey Hart (3/12/2013 11:51:00 PM) Post reply

    I kinda only just started writing poems, I'm not too sure if my first one is any good, but I was just wondering what your thoughts are on my first one I put up on here.
    'Acting Behind A Smile'

  • Ella Pitt (3/12/2013 6:10:00 AM) Post reply

    Would really appreciate it if anybody could check out my poems particularly the newest ones

  • Waka Waka (3/1/2013 12:54:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    is this a free verse poem?



    I like to play sports
    Baseball, softball, football
    In a way there all the same
    a ball you need to throw
    but yet they are completely diffrent
    to the eye of the beholder


    P.S. im in jr. high

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    • Faustina Marie (3/1/2013 7:03:00 PM) Post reply

      yes it is. " there" should be " they're" and " diffrent" is missing an e

  • Phillip Ibsen (2/22/2013 6:02:00 AM) Post reply

    hi.. just joined poem hunter
    i love writing poems as a hobby and whenever am free.
    most of the poems i read from other poets are awesome
    and some friends encouraged me to join poetry club
    i would like to get your comments... on some of the pieces i write
    i know am not perfect but at least i will have to try....

  • Muhammad Mirash (2/21/2013 4:41:00 AM) Post reply

    Please read my new poem 'Truth and Imagination' and give me your valuable advices.
    read and comment my other poems also

  • Jackson Olagunju (2/17/2013 7:31:00 AM) Post reply

    Hy everyone am jackson frm Nigeria and am a young poet am try to be a very gud poet i want u guys to read sum of my poem and tel me wat u tink plz ur comment are needed....tanx

  • Sarmad Ali (2/8/2013 1:20:00 AM) Post reply

    Heyy!
    I would really love if please someone read my new poems Forlorn Young snd Dwelling snail
    I would also love if i get some poet friends :)

  • Jagmeet Singh (1/28/2013 11:03:00 AM) Post reply

    I'm Not a proffesional poet, but like to write poems as a hobby.
    According to my colleagues they are well written.

    When i read other old but gold poets' poems, so difficult language
    is used and most were boring.My poems are easy to understand
    and full of fun.
    so enjoy reading and comment as much as you can.

  • Rosemary Daguio (1/21/2013 4:10:00 AM) Post reply

    Hello everyone. i just joined this great site this month. I'm inviting you all to please visit my page, read my poems. I would really appreciate your message or comments. Thank you very much.

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