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  • Kharon March (6/4/2013 12:50:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    hey everyone would you please rateand comment on my poems and in return i will do the some

  • Julianna Mcleod (6/4/2013 10:52:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    Hey everyone :) I am creating a series of poems called " Waves from Melbourne' so far I have added parts one, two and three. Please read them and enjoy :)

  • Just Desire (6/3/2013 9:55:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    hey guys please read my new poem ABOUT YOU WHAT I HATE :) :) love ya[3

  • Just Desire (6/2/2013 11:06:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    hello everybody i'm a student and just written a poem and comment on it please! ! ! ! i promise your read mine i'll read yours :) thank you [3

  • ..... W@king Up..... (6/2/2013 2:48:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    Hi everyone
    Please would you both rate and comment on my poems?Thanks :)

  • Syed Mowla (5/17/2013 2:45:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply Stage

    What do you think?

    Oath to dreams

    A soothing voice is hard to embrace
    When you feel undeserved of its grace
    The sweetness of her fruit is hard to taste
    From guilt embedded within your shame
    Lies upon lies built your heavenly estate
    For her to enjoy and believe that her fate
    Lie within your lies and truth distorted
    And reality is a scenery she surely hates
    So we sit and imagine a hopeful dream
    As dreams are surely better than what awaits

    Syed Mowla

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  • T.a Shabazz (5/16/2013 10:14:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply Stage

    Tell me what you think!
    Visions

    I close my eyes and invision a place where I'm in your arms and the world spins faster around us while we stay still. The rain falls down but we don't hear a sound. Not the war could tear us apart. The floor could break giving way to hell. But my eyes are still staring trapped in your gaze. You cast a shadow on me that makes me tremble with puzzlement. I feel safe. Your skin is warm and your eyes longing for something more. You whisper something that stops me dead in my tracks. I look and match your gaze as we lock and stare into relazation of each others souls for the first time.

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    • Fiona Schwartzinoff (12/31/2013 9:23:00 PM) Post reply Stage

      You are quite talented. This is a powerful passage. I was expecting something cheesy and cliche. But you pulled it of great! My favorite part is the last line! :) Check out my poetry when you get a ... more

  • Vizard Dhawan (5/15/2013 11:20:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    can you all read and comment on my poem
    anything for you my enemy
    autobiography and
    z131
    thanks

  • Vizard Dhawan (5/15/2013 11:08:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    hey buddies
    earlier i used to write onl romance piece but gradually i have shifted my genre and tried something new which seem to be better.
    I think you should read my poems once and ponder over them
    do not forget to comment.
    thanks.

  • Srimayee Ganguly (5/15/2013 12:42:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    I have a penchant for reading and writing. My elation and passions all lie in arts. I read in class IX and am the topper in English.

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