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  • Rookie Nathania Rose (12/5/2013 7:23:00 PM) Post reply
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    My first post: " Perfect"

    Picture perfect people of an uncommon variety
    Providing icing on the cake for your average ad-man
    Slip in a thin slice of subliminal messaging
    And skip the sympathy
    Perfection is just a few clicks away
    For your average ad-man

    She finds it elsewhere
    At the ends of her fingers
    She conjures up perfection
    Flushing out the rest
    Disregard the devastation
    She will be the best

    He finds it in the emptiness
    Desolation and drought
    Where hunger pangs rein
    Over what little remains
    Ignore the ache
    He will be beautiful

    But don't forget what it takes
    For your average ad-man
    Just a few clicks
    A touch of manipulation
    To set millions on the road to an unattainable destination

  • Rookie - 15 Points Sara Dickson (11/23/2013 8:31:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Hey everybody! I just joined a day ago, and would really like some comments and reviews on my poetry. Maybe share ideas for improvements. Thanks, and here is a poem to get you started:

    The Wolf

    The wolf, the twisted, wretched creature of shadows,
    Sat in the center of the underworld,
    Waiting for the next dying soul to come within his reach,
    Controls the balance of life and death so cruel,
    Biting the frayed string as one life hangs by a simple thread,
    His heart as blackened and shriveled as a prune decaying,
    The pale gray trees around him are still,
    Gnarled sorry things but,
    They are like the skeletons of the lost,
    Their pointed branches reach out to him,
    Begging to see the forgiving light of day again,
    Yearning for a sign of happiness,
    Even if only in the form of a single shard of light,
    But the wolf's blank eyes look away in disgust,
    For he knows that they can no longer grasp life,
    While their blood still flowed they were blind,
    Did not see how wrong they were in their ways,
    And though now they have open eyes, it is already too late,
    Their reward is worse than death itself,
    For each night as the moon shines upon the trees dead,
    Stained souls, blackened souls, are released from their spindly prisons,
    As they are freed, tortured screams and sobs echo through the night,
    Trapped in their worst nightmares and memories,
    Dying repeatedly their terrible deaths,
    Yet all this time the wolf has watched them suffer as he suffered himself,
    But now the price, the time he owed as a guardian has been paid,
    So he slinks silently away in the dark.

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    • Rookie - 15 Points Herbert Guitang (11/28/2013 9:18:00 PM) Post reply

      Beautiful poem Sara. Try to read some of my poems and comment if you learn on my poems

  • Rookie - 42 Points Mary Amrutha (11/16/2013 4:31:00 AM) Post reply

    http://www.poemhunter.com/mary-amrutha/ kindly read and support...

  • Rookie Katniss Everdeen (11/16/2013 3:57:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply


    Staring at the dark skies
    Waiting for the sun to rise
    When will this night end?
    When will the dark descend?
    Hope is beginning to fade
    The shattered bits of dreams, away they wade
    All those precious moments have passed
    Proving that happiness never lasts
    The Sun had set too soon
    Leaving behind the dark sky, without a moon
    Now the silent tears roll down my cheek
    Though they are silent, they are louder than a shriek
    I’m dying inside but you cannot see
    All the pain is running through me
    All I can do is to curse my fate
    But I know, for the sun, I’ll have to wait
    And I hope to find it some day
    And if I ever do, my fears, it will allay.

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    • Rookie Fiona Schwartzinoff (12/21/2013 2:58:00 PM) Post reply

      Quite a talent, Katniss! My favorite part is: Now the silent tears roll down my cheek Though they are silent, they are louder than a shriek I’m dying inside but you cannot see All the pain is ... more

  • Rookie Meera Mathur (10/24/2013 1:39:00 AM) Post reply

    Hey guys! I'm Meera new member. I'd like have some reviews for my poem 'Belong'. I hope you guys will read it and like it. Here it is:
    Holdin your arm
    keeps me warm
    Being around you give me no harm

    No matter how far we are from each other
    We can't be apart
    because we belong together forever

    Our love for each other
    will always remain alive
    We can't be togther says the fate of our lives

    But still holding you love
    keeps me above
    From the rain of tear
    there's so much pain for me to bear

    I'm drowing into the deep darkness of pain
    Please come for my love to claim
    because we belong togther forever.

  • Rookie - 86 Points Kathleen Neff (10/14/2013 10:25:00 AM) Post reply

    Hey everyone it's me again with a new poem. I hope you like this one. It's what i kinda came up with to be the opposite of my first one like to fight against it.

    Title: Why not me?

    Oh some may call it a curse
    A life like mine
    But others
    A blessing
    It certainly a lonely life
    But a fulfilling one at best
    It's my cross to bare
    And I bare it gladly
    Someone has to take a stand against evil
    Why should it not be me?
    Why should I stand by while
    others ignore it?
    Ignoring the killing
    evil leaves behind in it's path
    while they walk the streets.
    Someone must stop it
    Why should it not be me?
    Me who lives alone,
    me who fights back.
    Me who will stand against evil.
    Why should it not be me?

  • Rookie - 86 Points Kathleen Neff (10/11/2013 10:46:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Hey everyone, im new so I hope you enjoy my first poem. (Which is down below)

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  • Rookie - 86 Points Kathleen Neff (10/11/2013 10:45:00 AM) Post reply | Read 2 replies

    Black as night
    Cold as ice
    The darkness
    can consume any in sight
    Blind they are
    to sight and sound
    Until they fall from
    the ground
    Frozen they become
    never to wake
    until the night
    Darkness they face
    Reborn as none
    Screaming and eating
    the sun
    Demons of shadows
    Ice and night
    Have come to take the light.

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  • Rookie Sara Zeo (10/10/2013 11:10:00 AM) Post reply

    hi guys i joined today, my poems are my feelings that i experianced...

  • Rookie Sara Zeo (10/10/2013 11:07:00 AM) Post reply

    every single dros of tears
    nt a waste
    even they have the
    may be to
    happiness or the

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