Teen Poetry and Discussions
(6/4/2013 12:50:00 PM)
hey everyone would you please rateand comment on my poems and in return i will do the some
(6/4/2013 10:52:00 AM)
Hey everyone :) I am creating a series of poems called " Waves from Melbourne' so far I have added parts one, two and three. Please read them and enjoy :)
(6/3/2013 9:55:00 AM)
hey guys please read my new poem ABOUT YOU WHAT I HATE :) :) love ya[3
(6/2/2013 11:06:00 AM)
hello everybody i'm a student and just written a poem and comment on it please! ! ! ! i promise your read mine i'll read yours :) thank you [3
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(6/2/2013 2:48:00 AM)
Please would you both rate and comment on my poems?Thanks :)
(5/17/2013 2:45:00 PM)
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What do you think?
Oath to dreams
A soothing voice is hard to embrace
When you feel undeserved of its grace
The sweetness of her fruit is hard to taste
From guilt embedded within your shame
Lies upon lies built your heavenly estate
For her to enjoy and believe that her fate
Lie within your lies and truth distorted
And reality is a scenery she surely hates
So we sit and imagine a hopeful dream
As dreams are surely better than what awaits
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(5/16/2013 10:14:00 PM)
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Tell me what you think!
I close my eyes and invision a place where I'm in your arms and the world spins faster around us while we stay still. The rain falls down but we don't hear a sound. Not the war could tear us apart. The floor could break giving way to hell. But my eyes are still staring trapped in your gaze. You cast a shadow on me that makes me tremble with puzzlement. I feel safe. Your skin is warm and your eyes longing for something more. You whisper something that stops me dead in my tracks. I look and match your gaze as we lock and stare into relazation of each others souls for the first time.
(5/15/2013 11:20:00 PM)
can you all read and comment on my poem
anything for you my enemy
(5/15/2013 11:08:00 PM)
earlier i used to write onl romance piece but gradually i have shifted my genre and tried something new which seem to be better.
I think you should read my poems once and ponder over them
do not forget to comment.
(5/15/2013 12:42:00 PM)
I have a penchant for reading and writing. My elation and passions all lie in arts. I read in class IX and am the topper in English.