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  • John Westlake Freshman - 2nd Stage (9/15/2014 5:19:00 AM) Post reply

    Very nice poem. It's a pity that you won't post your poems on the main site. More people will be able to enjoy your work if you do

  • Abekah Emmanuel Freshman - 2nd Stage (9/10/2014 1:30:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Lets still write to educate as well as to entertain the world. Keep it up all you writers!

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    • John Westlake Freshman - 2nd Stage (9/11/2014 2:26:00 AM) Post reply

      I would say both are extremely important, as long as it it done in the right way

  • Gangadharan Nair Pulingat Veteran Poet - 3rd Stage (9/9/2014 4:45:00 AM) Post reply

    Poetry for teens and students requires more importance in creation and easy to recite and understand meanings.

  • Carter Nedax Rookie - 1st Stage (9/5/2014 11:25:00 PM) Post reply | Read 4 replies

    warning: it may be a little dark.

    Pain don't increase,
    In vain i ask " may i be released?"
    love come in like a dove
    But please don't come from above.
    I know where I am, but not where I land.
    Please pain... Just refrain.

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  • Abekah Emmanuel Freshman - 2nd Stage (9/2/2014 4:54:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Hellow fellow great hunters,
    I have just submitted my new poem entitled- I TOO, SING POETRY. please check it out and comment on it. Rate is always important! Thank you all!

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    • John Westlake Freshman - 2nd Stage (9/8/2014 3:55:00 PM) Post reply

      Have not forgotten about you. You are on list of people to read before the end of the year. Have faith and I will get to you

  • Abekah Emmanuel Freshman - 2nd Stage (9/2/2014 1:28:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Thank you mr.Westlake for your kind response, i am personally grateful for this advice. Indeed we are many here and so one must be smart enough to get the desired attention...I particularly dont mind how many people visit my page but how many people get touched by my message....I want every message of mine to be clear as possible. All the same, thank you. Let me also alert you of my new poem...ACCEPT MINE TOO....this time, a gratitude to the creator. Pleaae read it and comment on it....thank you all...

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    • John Westlake Freshman - 2nd Stage (9/2/2014 4:02:00 PM) Post reply

      Sir. The more poems you read, the more you may get noticed. I will read some of your poems and can inform other members of your work. That's easy enough for me to do. Whether they will read is up ... more

  • Nehemiah Theophylus Haokip Rookie - 1st Stage (8/29/2014 10:37:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Seven fake things of my mom words


    When I was hungry, you gave me your food
    Telling that my ward
    am not hungry yet, serve my food
    for I have ate just before
    and beliving that!
    I feed my ward with hunger and pain
    But one day he will feed me with his strength
    And recollect my tears
    Which has flow down in vain

    When I was in need of cloths
    You gave me a new cloths
    Leaving thoes comment of other
    As you were named as uniform
    Telling me that “my son”
    This is a small gift from your poor mom
    Beliving that someday
    I’ll bloom you with a golden dress
    To cover all her torn choths

    Dear my fellow teen
    pliz think how our mum suffer on us from childhood

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  • Abekah Emmanuel Freshman - 2nd Stage (8/29/2014 5:15:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    hello fellow young hunters, it is a pleasure to always meet you here. I hope you are all doing good.... I wish to inform you that i have done a few renovations on my new poem...GOOD MORNING! Please check it out and enjoy. Dont forget to rate and comment. Thank you all!

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  • Frederick James Bradley Moore Rookie - 1st Stage (8/28/2014 8:08:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    CHANGING THE WORLD

    changing the world
    is never an easy task

    because the minds of man never want to change
    but if you are crazy enough to try
    then others will be crazy eough to follow

    to change the world
    you dont have to be perfect
    all you need is an idea
    worth sharing and worth following

    to change the world
    your heart has to be into it
    you can`t half step what you do
    or everything will fall apart

    change, my friends
    is a great weapon
    one that everyman fears
    and some seek to avoid
    so beware that not everyone
    will change with you
    they are the lost ones

    to change the world
    you must be wise enough
    to hold your tongue
    and bear your arms

    to change the world
    you must be wise enough
    to speak of peace
    and surrender for your cause

    if you change the world in anyway
    you will be persecuted
    because man always fears
    anything he cant understand

    to change the world
    you need a foundation behind you
    that will encourage you to keep pushing the world
    when your broken and exausted

    to change the world
    your first step has to be yourself
    because you are the greatest catalyst for change
    and the greatest challenge to tradtion

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  • Hannah Bryson- Price Rookie - 1st Stage (8/28/2014 5:02:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Hey guys, I'm a bit new to Poem Hunter and I would love it if anyone would read my poems. I would greatly appreciate feedback or constructive criticism. [They are pretty much the same thing but you get the idea.]

    Thank you!

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    • John Westlake Freshman - 2nd Stage (8/28/2014 7:07:00 PM) Post reply

      Your name is on my list of poets that I need to read. I will (given time) read ALL of your poems and comment on as many as I can. I give my word on that. Profanisaurus

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