(12/17/2012 5:06:00 AM)
I am new on poemhunter........my name is Banu Dai. I stated writing a few years back, in an effort to listen to my inner voice, wanting to express what i cud never spell out even to my closest friends. I have put in my first piece and request you all to go through my work.......It's titled " Never Again" . Never Again, is the story of any girl, any woman, any one who has decided to finally say its " never going to be same again" to the man she once loved.
(12/17/2012 12:02:00 AM)
Hello everyone. I just joined Poem Hunter a few days ago and I am learning so much about myself since I started expressing my feelings though my words. I am doing my best at writing and if anyone could offer any opinions on my poems I will know where my strengths and weaknesses are and work on improving. Please feel free to comment on a certain poem with suggestions or something that needs to be worked on and I will not take it bad. It will help me. Of course I am never against positive feedback either.
Thank you for taking the time to get to know me. I only have 5 poems so far, but Im working on it.
(12/16/2012 2:18:00 PM)
I am new on poem hunter and I've just uploaded new poems. They were written around 3 years ago and was wondering if anyone would offer some advice.
Jokotade Olumide Joseph
(12/16/2012 1:07:00 AM)
Hi everyone, am new here and i've just uploaded some poems. I'll be very happy if u read and help critique it. Thanks
(12/15/2012 2:13:00 PM)
Hey I am new on this site and I just uploaded some new peoms. i'd love it if you could read them and give me your comments and critiques. Thanks
(12/15/2012 8:00:00 AM)
My name should be familiar to you, as you have been reading quite a lot of my poetry lately. I am a professional, internationally published poet. My biography only says 'something here for everyone, ' as indeed it is, but the whole story can be gotten from me...message me and I will tell you.
(12/14/2012 7:51:00 AM)
Check this out peeps, though a little rough...your advice and criticism is would go a long way to smoothen my writings...
Quietly bending my pride,
for you to become my bride
so as to have a smooth ride
till a child comes our way.
Take this not as dried
or too crunchy fried.
But rather be mild,
and see me as wild
with no where to hide
'trying to pass the tide
created by your dad...'
(12/13/2012 10:06:00 PM)
Hi Im Gary...kind of new to the site, any takers on reading my work?" Thy Hunts Mans Hound" , I like this one...any feedback would be greatly appreciated...When I can will return the favor.
(12/13/2012 11:18:00 AM)
hi, I am vikas chandra, a 3rd year engineering student from INDIA. I have been doing poetry from quite a long time and till now i have been showing my poetry skills at www.touchtalent.com - India's largest online portal for art and talent. I would like you all to come and see some of my art there. Now its time for me to showcase the same on international platform and who other than poemhumter can provide me this opportunity?I would look for a good interaction with you all and also will be waiting for your valuable comments.
(12/12/2012 4:57:00 PM)
Hello, this is my first time on this site. I just posted a few poems, and would love criticism of any kind. Thanks for the time.