(11/4/2013 5:54:00 PM)
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Words are powerful....poet friends....a peaceful greeting, to those who share this forum. My name is Susan Lacovara from Long Island, New York in the United States of America. I invite all, into the yellowing pages of my lifelong love affair with poetry. I, with honest enthusiasm and appreciation, will welcome, and respond to your comments.
I hope that within my writings, you feel comfortable enough to stay awhile...linger...and maybe even return. I have long considered putting together a collection of my poetry, and an odd assortment of various letters penned... perhaps finding the gem that is Poemhunter will serve as my starting point. The poems I have submitted here, are mostly new...within my decades of countless books, hundreds upon hundreds of older poems await their being set free...like a proverbial time capsule, well preserved....and if I were granted Aladdin' s Lamp...I wish you to enjoy...in PEACE.
Eliseo 'elcid' Cinco Iii
(11/3/2013 3:55:00 AM)
I am an aspiring boo-author and right now I need feedback on the poems I composed.Thanks.
(11/2/2013 10:46:00 AM)
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Hi, Poemhunter community. I am between old and new but I would like to come outside into light. I would like you who is reading these sentences to please crawl through my poems and give me some thumb ups or down. Thank you.
(11/1/2013 7:09:00 AM)
hello everybody...i hope you would like my oems and give feedback....
(10/31/2013 12:38:00 PM)
Just entered the amazing world of poetry. Would be great if some of you can read my first poem and say what you like/not like about it.
read here http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/a-fresh-breath-of-life/
(10/30/2013 11:42:00 AM)
Hello Honorable Poets. Kindly Read, rate, vote and comment my New Poem " I'M IN LOVE WITH YOU"
(10/30/2013 11:22:00 AM)
I'm relatively new to poemhunter and definitely open to ideas and points of improvement. If anyone would be willing to check out/critique my poems particularly I am Cooked, Rubies and Garnets and The Perfectionist I will be eternally grateful!
Kaylin Ruth Adarne
(10/30/2013 7:27:00 AM)
I‘d cut my nails, tie my hair, and check myself in the mirror twice
All I know is I ought to look nice
To please you, though it’s as clear the blue skies that I don’t have to
Cause you like the exact reflection in the mirror and not the way people want me to
Then we would meet at your simple and loving place
Where we’d talk and play simple tunes
Then you’d blush and smile when I look at your face
And to your eyes, as bright as the moon
Our fingers would touch slightly and softly
Would give me shivers that I want to linger
But I’d hold my heart back and smile at the thought shyly
For all I know, we’re just kids and nothing would go deeper
Sometimes we’d sit at the sofa and watch a movie
And I noticed how shy, quiet, and serious you are from a small distance
Those were the times that I tried to move closely
It’s sad. No matter how small of a distance would fade all the chance
The day you asked me to go with you to a sacred place
A hangout that I’d always remember till this day
When I felt the most scared and awkward of all times
I knew you want me to be closer to Him and I want you to be mine
In my mind it stayed as a memory flashing back every now and then
There are times I would smile
There are moments I would cry
It’s hard to accept the fact that those are just memories remembered then forgotten
Days went by as quiet as the air, the vision of you became a blur
Can’t remember exactly how you turned into such a “nobody” in the end
If ever I’ll have your touch again, I am not sure
All the times we spent for now are just fading moments
please I need criticisms..thank you
Kaylin Ruth Adarne
(10/30/2013 6:43:00 AM)
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Hi! I am Kaylin from Philippines! I am struggling poet not perfect in grammar and hungry for knowledge and criticims. I have been so inlove with words so much.
(10/29/2013 8:42:00 PM)
Hello my name is Brandon Carter and I am 17 years old
I dont know how I became so pulled into poetry but I love it
I love writing dark, twisted and very deep poem but in the further
future I want to become a famous poem......like Allan Edgar Pollen.