Relationships and Love

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  • Rookie - 115 Points Zed Undead (9/9/2014 7:49:00 PM) Post reply
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    Please look at my new haiku and tell me what you think though the story that happened behind it is sad

  • Gold Star - 15,147 Points John Westlake (9/9/2014 11:22:00 AM) Post reply | Read 2 replies

    The path of true love never did run smooth

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    • Gold Star - 15,147 Points Melikhaya Zagagana (10/28/2014 5:51:00 AM) Post reply

      I discourage that line because people take advantage of situation hoping they will use such irresponsible quotes.

    • Gold Star - 15,147 Points Melikhaya Zagagana (10/28/2014 5:51:00 AM) Post reply

      I discourage that line because people take advantage of situation hoping they will use such irresponsible quotes.

  • Bronze Star - 6,614 Points Amitava Sur (9/5/2014 10:16:00 AM) Post reply

    An angel in the night.

    In the misty moon -lit night an angel did alight
    Peeped me through the window-
    With my beloved holding tight.
    She was smiling at me with a gleam in her face
    Having a glowing ring all around her head.

    I jumped up with a maddening joy -
    And told her to come near me.
    But with a majestic smile in her face
    She was nodding her head, didn't move.
    I asked her - 'then why my dear..... again to make me cry '!

    She told me 'Oh' dear I also do cry and ought to be with thine
    But the body what I left, can never get back again.
    The angel brought me tonight to see you and say hello-
    I was always yours and still I am thine'.

    With a pool of tears in my eyes I waved my hands out,
    The angel with a lovely smile started to fly -
    Clasping you under her wings, saying good bye.

    I sprang up in my bed, rubbing my tearing eyes
    Still in a hallucination thinking where was I?
    In the morning's soothing light - I looked up in the sky
    I shouted with a cry 'Hey-I will come very soon -you wait for mine'

    A white cloud was passing by -
    Slowly away from my sight………
    Amitava (20.01.2014) on my birth day today.


  • Gold Star - 21,206 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (9/4/2014 10:20:00 AM) Post reply

    Love stories are not always success stories. Love the greatest emotion and beautiful remembrance of life is a best thing sometimes to enjoy while we are lonely.

  • Rookie - 16 Points Ck Jackson (8/23/2014 1:36:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    A random and simple thought came to me while I was perusing friends latest pictures and posts on facebook. That thought became a catalyst for my current growing curiosity. So, I'm now compelled to pose it to the public:

    I happened to scroll past a picture posted by a FB friend of her and her family on vacation. She's a former childhood neighbor of mine some 20+ years ago, and also happens to be the first girl I ever 'locked lips' with during a passionate game of hide-and-seek around the ripe old age of about 13. :)

    Anyhow, I began to wonder about how rare that seemingly insignificant and trivial occurrence might be. How many people happen to be linked to the first person they made out with via twitter, fb or other social media?What do you suppose the percentage is?

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  • Gold Star - 14,867 Points Mohammad Skati (8/23/2014 9:54:00 AM) Post reply

    Love is the corner stone in any true relationship because it unites between two great lovers in truth... Without love, then it's wasting time.............. Our poems depend on our loving of people and things around us.

  • Rookie - 37 Points Allian Bern (8/8/2014 12:34:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply


    Out of control
    We broke the chains that tied us whole
    A fire inside us, it melts our words
    Every secret has its own truth
    The more we keep it, the more it shows
    I'm not saying the words that are right
    And you keep doing actions that you hate
    The brain collides the beats of the heart
    Though it will not pause, more it will not stop
    Same question plays when we lie in our bed
    Rather to eject it, we load more instead
    We can't kill the living pictures in our head
    Wake or sleep it stays as we live
    But one thing pushes us to the wrong way
    It keeps dividing us as we step
    We want to look back but we're stiff necked
    I have a thousand words to say
    It's hard to let go all promises
    Have to pretend you are gone and dead
    Know you'll do the same thing as i did

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Samantha Hale (7/26/2014 3:11:00 PM) Post reply

    My Heart Song

    When will someone come along,
    And listen to my heart song?
    The moon is crying all alone tonight,
    As she tries to revive her sun that died.
    I am the moon, left all alone,
    A shadow in a room, a name unknown.

    So many people left me in the rain,
    My heart, they realized could not be tamed.
    Your absence brutally left me, as I decided to fight or flee;
    Like heavens wrath, how they tore lost angels wings.
    This song I wrote for you, will not turn out like me,
    Abandoned and unheard, left to die in a restless sleep.

    They all played with unstable fire,
    Typical of a drunk, lovesick choir.
    Drowning this flame, they lost what they had,
    We were not as I dreamed: rivals, no longer comrades.
    Hoping that you are not as you seem,
    That we were meant to be an inseparable team.

    I have a journal with rough drafts, full of unspoken words,
    So I’m begging you to stay, to not leave this song unheard.
    The drums of your heart beat along to my tune,
    A melody I slave for, I am not immune.
    Our music is meant to show and shine,
    I hope you keep replaying it in time.
    Our music is meant to show and shine,
    I hope you keep replaying in time.

  • Rookie - 284 Points Drashi Shah (7/9/2014 4:22:00 AM) Post reply

    Love from bottom of heart…

    Though very difficult,
    Though very hard,
    Not easy to achieve,
    Not easy to handle,
    Still you loved me from
    The bottom of your heart..

    Upcoming disputes,
    Upcoming talks,
    Unnecessary walks,
    Late night talks,
    Sometime tear,
    Still love to hear,
    That you love me from
    The bottom of your heart..

    Many fears,
    Then also near,
    A lot of miles between,
    Still we smile,
    Because we love each other
    And I promise further
    To love you
    From bottom of my heart…

    Can use this line,
    From the bottom of heart,
    Just because,
    You allowed making
    Our heart as one...

    -love you for the reason you are...

    ©Drashi P. Shah

  • Rookie - 0 Points K, C Baylor (6/26/2014 11:51:00 AM) Post reply

    Love is the most sought after, but seldomly obtained energy in the Universe. We all search for it, want it but almost never completely give it. The confusion lies in the Word " Love" we think it's only a word or a feeling when it is actually much more. Love is putting action to a feeling. Love searches to understand each of us, it is kind, it is non judgmental, it is long suffering, It forgives and not just wrong doing but it forgives us for our own shortcomings. Love doesn't fade like the latest fashion, it grows as you grow. Love shelters, love sacrifices, love softens even the hardest of hearts. Love doesn't just say I Love You, but displays itself in both grand gestures and the smallest, smile provoking ways as well. We will only obtain real, pure and true love when we ourselves are willing to give real, pure and true love.

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