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  • Kaylin Ruth Adarne (10/30/2013 7:29:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply Stage

    Fading Moments

    I‘d cut my nails, tie my hair, and check myself in the mirror twice
    All I know is I ought to look nice
    To please you, though it’s as clear the blue skies that I don’t have to
    Cause you like the exact reflection in the mirror and not the way people want me to

    Then we would meet at your simple and loving place
    Where we’d talk and play simple tunes
    Then you’d blush and smile when I look at your face
    And to your eyes, as bright as the moon

    Our fingers would touch slightly and softly
    Would give me shivers that I want to linger
    But I’d hold my heart back and smile at the thought shyly
    For all I know, we’re just kids and nothing would go deeper

    Sometimes we’d sit at the sofa and watch a movie
    And I noticed how shy, quiet, and serious you are from a small distance
    Those were the times that I tried to move closely
    It’s sad. No matter how small of a distance would fade all the chance

    The day you asked me to go with you to a sacred place
    A hangout that I’d always remember till this day
    When I felt the most scared and awkward of all times
    I knew you want me to be closer to Him and I want you to be mine

    In my mind it stayed as a memory flashing back every now and then
    There are times I would smile
    There are moments I would cry
    It’s hard to accept the fact that those are just memories remembered then forgotten

    Days went by as quiet as the air, the vision of you became a blur
    Can’t remember exactly how you turned into such a “nobody” in the end
    If ever I’ll have your touch again, I am not sure
    All the times we spent for now are just fading moments

    please I need criticisms..thank you

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    • Lydia Alvana (1/6/2014 2:11:00 PM) Post reply Stage

      i love this poem, i just do. it might be my fallacy but i really like this poem. the details on all the moment that mattered, and its like when you mature it just......disappears, and you know, its fu ... more

  • Alaa Hussain (10/12/2013 7:14:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    (Days) apologized to me a friend and
    said, I've missed the old days very
    simple words routine life fixed
    principles do not budge the rest of the
    time to renew and promised era and
    tender

  • Jeffrey Gonell (10/4/2013 11:50:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    Where Did You Go Last Night

    Baby, please tell me, where did you go last night?
    Please tell me the truth, and please do not lie.
    I have a deep feeling, that you have might,
    Not have been doing something that was right.
    Why on earth did you come so very late?
    Why did you creep slowly through the gate?
    What is the secret that you are trying hide?
    What are the things that you are holding inside?

    My love, where did you go last night?
    I searched but you were no where in sight.
    Where was the party?How was the ride?
    Why wasn't I invited, to be by your side?

    My love, where did you go last night?
    Why did you get up and leave me behind?
    My bed was half empty as I wondered why,
    My loving wife had just wondered on by.

    What is keeping you so busy,
    That you do not even miss me?
    Did you find somebody better,
    Does he have hotter weather?
    You can go off with him if you like,
    You broke my heart so take a hike.
    Were you ever really in love?
    Did I not satisfy you enough?

    Please tell me, where were you last night,
    When I wanted to grab you and hug you very tight?
    You were not around, no where to be found,
    You were not around, to receive my loving light.

    My love, where did you go last night?
    Why did you get up and leave me behind?
    My bed was half empty as I wondered why,
    My loving wife had just wondered on by.

    Where Did You Go Last Night! ?

    By Jeffrey Gonell

  • Jeffrey Gonell (10/4/2013 11:48:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    I Wish To

    I wish to stay, if you may, forever in you daze.
    I wish to say, that I pray, to remain in your craze.
    I wish to play, for you truly amaze, and have my heart ablaze.
    I wish to lay, with you all day, and forever stay this way.
    I wish to pay, the long way, to your heart with my soul without delay.
    I wish to raise, the fact that my heart stays, alive for you haze.
    I wish to chase, you through a maze, and trap you with my gaze.
    I wish to love you forever in every way, for the rest of my days.

    There is no equal, to the peaceful, way I feel when I'm with you.
    I sense a retrieval, of something gleeful, when I'm reminded you are my boo.
    I'll never be deceitful, so don't be fearful, for I'll always be true.
    My intentions are not evil, nor am I feeble, with me you'll never be blue.
    Ignore the people, your eyes will never be tearful, my type of love is new.
    I'm the type to make an upheaval, of the medieval, just to give you a romantic view.
    My words of love are so lethal, probably illegal, like me there are less than few.
    I'm the type to repeat romantic sequels, just to make you cheerful, for you that is what I’ll do.

    My attraction for you grew, as the winds of love blew,
    In your direction towards your beauty and I knew,
    We were meant to be as a perfect two.
    I also felt that you knew this too.
    You are the one who, knew what I was going through,
    When I felt crazy and stuck to you as glue.
    I went insane over you with just one clue,
    You were meant for me and I was meant for you.

    I wish to fly, you high, to the sky, beyond the moon.
    Hoping to make you my wife very very soon.
    My best I try, to be your guy, and that is why, I hold up your sun at high noon,
    I'm engulfed by the heat of your body like a hot day in June.
    I wish to comply, with your rules and never lie, I rather die, than put on costume.
    My loyalty is real and life without you would be my ultimate doom.
    I'll never make you cry, no reason why, to even defy, the role you assume,
    In my life that is why I am soon to be your groom.

    I wish to kiss you, and continue, to make you giggle.
    I wish to sprinkle, you with love as your eyes twinkle, leaving myself in you.
    I wish to give you, my heart and rekindle, what you lost while being single.
    I wish to issue, a worded symbol, of my love and forever leave it with you,
    I wish to let you see it, read it, and comprehend the signal.
    I wish to marry you, and forever carry you, off to my bed it's that simple.
    I wish to never swindle, not even a little, my love will never dwindle,
    I wish to remain true to your trust, my heart will never get old nor wrinkle,
    I just want to kiss you.


    The flowers of your beauty has bloomed, and as I zoom,
    I smell your perfume, I wish to plant my seed in your womb.
    My oh my, my lips get far from dry, and I get shy when you walk by, making my heart go boom,
    I wish to stay tuned, and get myself lost in your magical runes.

    I Wish To!

    By Jeffrey Gonell

  • Jeffrey Gonell (10/4/2013 11:47:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    When I Give You a Rose


    When I give you a rose, it means I wish to be with you for the rest of the day.
    You are the one I chose, to hold in my arms as we joyfully play.
    When I give you a rose, it means I need to kiss you and it's what I want to say.
    I want to hold you close, next to you I desire to lay.
    When I give you a rose, I am just trying to tell you that I just may,
    Be crazy in love with those, lovely features which you always display.
    When I give you a rose, I am asking for permission to walk your way,
    To see if I can remove your clothes, everyday for this moment I pray.

    I really cannot bare, to see you without me.
    As I look at you and stare, I need you to be,
    Willing to share, and willing to agree,
    I do really care, about giving you my love openly and free.

    When I give you a rose, it's real and not a joke.
    My eyes let out tears as my face gets soaked.
    When I give you rose, it's because my heart can catch a stroke.
    For it has much love to give you so please don't leave it broke.

    My love can take you high up into the air, and sit you on a tree.
    I really wish to fly you up there, to give you love and give you joy as we,
    Exchange something that is really rare, true happiness as we swim in our sea,
    Of our precious moment and I do dare, to find out if you are willing to marry me.

    When I give you a rose, it means I can see the smoke,
    Of the essence and beauty in your aura I wish to invoke.
    When I give you a rose, it means my heart spoke,
    Trying to share with you the love it desires to evoke.

    When I Give You a Rose!

    By Jeffrey Gonell

  • Jeffrey Gonell (10/4/2013 11:47:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply Stage

    I Forgive You

    Girl, I need you right now, so please come back to me.
    Don't be afraid, just come back and return honestly.
    Sometimes we do mistakes, sometimes we slip and fall,
    I'll do what it takes, to save our love, so just answer my call.
    I can forgive you, yes I really can,
    Let’s put this behind us, I truly understand.
    Let’s give this another chance, let me hold your hand,
    Let me take you out to dance, and let me be your man.

    I can forgive you, if you're willing to put this behind us.
    There's no reason to explain, there's no reason to make a fuss.
    I can forgive you, yes I really can, if you truly want me too,
    I can forgive you, if you trust me, that I won’t hold this against you.

    My Baby, please do not worry, I forgive you,
    My lady, please don't be sorry, I believe you.
    My girl, don't go away, for I forgive you,
    My world, don't run astray, I'll receive you.

    Sometimes we are captured by temptations,
    Being fooled to partake in false sensations.
    We get clouded by phony illusions, phony deceptions,
    Phony delusions, and completely false interpretations.
    I have been through that, I know how it can feel,
    I have been through that, ones dignity it tries to steal.
    I won’t let you go down that path, no need for guilt,
    Clean the dirt with my bath, and return to the castle we built.

    I won’t use this as leverage, I'll never ever dare.
    You were the only one, to ever love me with care.
    You're the only one who has entrance, into my heart.
    I forgive you, and I will never allow for us to split apart.

    My Baby, please do not worry, I forgive you,
    My lady, please don't be sorry, I believe you.
    My girl, don't go away, for I forgive you,
    My world, don't run astray, I'll receive you.

    By Jeffrey Gonell

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  • Erin Thomas (10/3/2013 4:19:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    How do I withdraw my poem from your silly little popularity contest?

  • Jeffrey Gonell (10/2/2013 12:14:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    The Light of Your Smile

    The light of your smile, shines with the color of heaven,
    You are the Angel I seek, to guild me through my lessons.
    The light of you smile, shines with the plasma of stars,
    Your beauty takes me to the cosmos; out so very far.
    The light of your smile, gave me the desire to rise,
    Up to your level of expectation, and transform into your kind-of guy.
    The light of your smile, woke me up and brought me to life,
    Your profound love...gave me the wings that flew me above the skies.

    You leave me hypnotized me for a while,
    When you give me the light of your smile,
    It makes me go crazy and wild,
    I can't wait to see you walking down that aisle.

    The light of your smile, struck me and opened my eyes,
    Those rays of love, shun new hopes of happiness into my life.
    The light of your smile, gave me the experience of you,
    Leaving me with the desire to hold you, kiss you, and make you my boo.
    The light of your smile, took me out of a bad dream,
    You rescued me with your love, love only you could bring.
    The light of your smile, zapped me and left my soul in sparks,
    Sometimes it's hard for me to believe that I once lived so sad and dark.

    You leave me hypnotized me for a while,
    When you give me the light of your smile,
    It makes me go crazy and wild,
    I can't wait to see you walking down that aisle.

    The Light of Your Smile

    By Jeffrey Gonell

  • Jeffrey Gonell (10/2/2013 12:13:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    My Girl.



    My Girl is the one who has always been there,

    Holding me through the darkest of times without a care.

    She is the one who let me into her generous heart,

    The one who gave me enough strength to begin a new start.



    My Girl, if only everyone had a girl like this,

    The whole world would be at peace and at bliss.

    Because my girl is the type to always have me in bed,

    Away from trouble, while true love I'm being fed.



    My Girl, Oh yeah, I really do love my girl,

    She's the one who restored life in my lost world.

    She rained upon me entire oceans when I was thirsty;

    Quenching the emotional droughts that had me lonely and burning.



    My Girl, I was talking to them, but now I'm talking to you,

    I'm forever grateful, for pulling me out from a life so cruel.

    My Girl, I love you, I really do boo, and I only want to love you,

    So please, would you marry me?For my love for you, is nothing but true.



    My Girl



    By Jeffrey Gonell

  • Indranil Bhaduri (9/30/2013 11:02:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    Respected fellow poets. I would be most happy if you read through my simple poem 'End Of Existence' which is written regarding Female infanticide. The link is given below. Please vote and comment. With good wishes to all.

    http://www.poemhunter.com/contest-vote/end-of-existence/

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