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  • Freshman - 2,321 Points Points Of View (9/14/2014 10:30:00 AM) Post reply
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    I met this guy..
    When I was in senior high
    He looks like Brad Pitt...good looking guy
    Happy when his around-sad when not around.
    I like him a lot - I love him i quote

    He became my boyfriend
    Friends&love truly blend..
    Exchanging thoughts and wishes
    Holding our love...hold on to our promises...

    But in one snap!
    Like a bubble pop!
    You are gone...you left me alone
    In a place without a single trace....

    After 25 years...school planning
    For our batch reunion 'Alumni Home Coming'
    I met some of my batch mate on Facebook
    They invited me to be there..????'He will also be there'
    Got excited 'see him at long last! '
    I should be there! it's a must!

    Without a further ado....
    I booked my plane ticket I will fly I will go.
    The waiting is over....this is the night to remember!
    I walked thru the gate....
    Told myself'you're beautiful&sexy' ;) have faith!
    One by one I gave a glance..
    Was looking for a familiar face
    I've known at once....

    Some of my classmate forget about me..
    Had to remind I'm Ging it's me!
    Back then was an ugly-duckling coward
    Or in a joke they call me(butiki) lizard...

    As the night goes along way.
    I begun to mingle..i laugh and giggle...
    Suddenly, someone whisper and say,
    'Jonathan wants to talk to you'
    I follow where he pointed..I saw Him seated
    Knee's shiver, heartbeat tremble..
    I can't move. I can't walk anytime I fall
    I was stuck on my feet...speechless
    Then he stood up walked to my side..Speechless....
    He held my hand we slowly walk side by side..
    Lipped-tight, I am terrified...

    We walked mile..
    Paused....he look at me and smile.
    Moonlight reflect the shadow of yesteryear
    Stars silently peer...
    Heavy load I kept for a long time...
    My sentiment now in battling crime
    Emotions too strong to resist
    Hatred slowly drifted even insist...

    I ask 'why you left me?'in a husky tone.
    Tears rushing....I can't hold on
    He took a deep breath..........
    'I'm sorry Ging...
    I broke your heart but I didn't mean...
    Too young and fussed
    Scared I was....
    that I won't be able to meet your desire
    I realized, w/out you I can't bear..
    But It's too late I can't find you..
    Every time I heard our favorite song on the radio,
    - Nothing's gonna change my love for you-
    Memory of you rolled by..reminds me of you..

    Silence succumbed
    I took air from my diaphragm....
    Blew to the wind
    Now my yearning ends
    I raised my head....met his eyes....
    .no one would blink, scared one's gone in one wink..
    Instinct in one slow motion he hugged me,
    ... tapped his back. 'don't worry I'm OK'
    '25 years long enough..I've move on'
    Time erased the pain..
    You had a special place in my heart forever remain..
    I'm sorry I left, I was hurt then..
    I came wanted to see you,
    wanting our love story to have an ending,
    A love story once good once winding'..

    Past midnight I checked my wristwatch
    ' I need to go back to the hotel, have early flight tomorrow,
    have to go, thanks you spent time with me'I told him..
    He replied 'OK take care'
    'leave you now without the thorn inside my heart'I said

    I reached hotel room, still was out of control,
    his voice echoed-made me a fool..
    The scenes keep coming,
    conversations keep lingering...
    'till my deep thought was disturbed,
    got text message from Jonathan-
    'thanks Ging! had wonderful evening,
    it was such a relief,
    guilty feeling i hide for a quite time..
    now slowly drifting'..

  • Rookie - 114 Points Zed Undead (9/10/2014 9:32:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Home and love is my new poem please look

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    • Rookie - 114 Points Melikhaya Zagagana (9/21/2014 11:05:00 AM) Post reply

      May be you should try to write it in prose format or a short story form. I dont' know just my opinion; what do you think?

  • Gold Star - 13,083 Points Akhtar Jawad (9/10/2014 7:50:00 AM) Post reply

    Come September and Sweet Heart

    Why don’t you remember?
    Remember again,
    Music of September,
    I still retain.
    We met in the greenery,
    A wet, lovely scenery,
    A teen age romance,
    The music and dance.

    Why don’t you remember?
    Remember again,
    Magic of September,
    Your shyness, my refrain.
    Love at first sight,
    In a moonlit night,
    Fragrance of white flowers,
    And the mild rain showers.

    Why don’t you remember?
    Remember again,
    Picnic of September,
    A love to remain.
    The maiden kiss,
    The beautiful bliss.
    A lasting joy,
    Not a moment’s toy.

    Why don’t you remember?
    Remember again,
    The tune, Come September,
    We can still entertain.
    In the heat strokes,
    It still provokes,
    The desires of romance,
    We can sing and dance.

    Akhtar Jawad

    Can anybody sing this poem by me?The poem is also available at poemhunter.com

  • Rookie - 600 Points Hannah Bp (9/9/2014 8:14:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    I really love this quote I found on Google. I don't know who it was by. She's beautiful but she'll never admit it. Music is her life, literally. Ask for a good song and she'll give you five. Sweats and wearing her hair down are her trademarks. She is afraid of the dark and obsessed with her friends. When she smiles her whole face lights up. And her heart is broken by a guy who doesn't love her. And you know what?She actually cares." It's more of a teenagerish quote, but I can relate to it.

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  • Rookie - 114 Points Zed Undead (9/9/2014 7:49:00 PM) Post reply

    Please look at my new haiku and tell me what you think though the story that happened behind it is sad

  • Gold Star - 13,311 Points John Westlake (9/9/2014 11:22:00 AM) Post reply | Read 2 replies

    The path of true love never did run smooth

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    • Gold Star - 13,311 Points Melikhaya Zagagana (10/28/2014 5:51:00 AM) Post reply

      I discourage that line because people take advantage of situation hoping they will use such irresponsible quotes.

    • Gold Star - 13,311 Points Melikhaya Zagagana (10/28/2014 5:51:00 AM) Post reply

      I discourage that line because people take advantage of situation hoping they will use such irresponsible quotes.

  • Veteran Poet - 4,708 Points Amitava Sur (9/5/2014 10:16:00 AM) Post reply

    An angel in the night.

    In the misty moon -lit night an angel did alight
    Peeped me through the window-
    With my beloved holding tight.
    She was smiling at me with a gleam in her face
    Having a glowing ring all around her head.

    I jumped up with a maddening joy -
    And told her to come near me.
    But with a majestic smile in her face
    She was nodding her head, didn't move.
    I asked her - 'then why my dear..... again to make me cry '!

    She told me 'Oh' dear I also do cry and ought to be with thine
    But the body what I left, can never get back again.
    The angel brought me tonight to see you and say hello-
    I was always yours and still I am thine'.

    With a pool of tears in my eyes I waved my hands out,
    The angel with a lovely smile started to fly -
    Clasping you under her wings, saying good bye.

    I sprang up in my bed, rubbing my tearing eyes
    Still in a hallucination thinking where was I?
    In the morning's soothing light - I looked up in the sky
    I shouted with a cry 'Hey-I will come very soon -you wait for mine'

    A white cloud was passing by -
    Slowly away from my sight………
    Amitava (20.01.2014) on my birth day today.


  • Gold Star - 10,417 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (9/4/2014 10:20:00 AM) Post reply

    Love stories are not always success stories. Love the greatest emotion and beautiful remembrance of life is a best thing sometimes to enjoy while we are lonely.

  • Rookie - 16 Points Ck Jackson (8/23/2014 1:36:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    A random and simple thought came to me while I was perusing friends latest pictures and posts on facebook. That thought became a catalyst for my current growing curiosity. So, I'm now compelled to pose it to the public:

    I happened to scroll past a picture posted by a FB friend of her and her family on vacation. She's a former childhood neighbor of mine some 20+ years ago, and also happens to be the first girl I ever 'locked lips' with during a passionate game of hide-and-seek around the ripe old age of about 13. :)

    Anyhow, I began to wonder about how rare that seemingly insignificant and trivial occurrence might be. How many people happen to be linked to the first person they made out with via twitter, fb or other social media?What do you suppose the percentage is?

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  • Gold Star - 11,404 Points Mohammad Skati (8/23/2014 9:54:00 AM) Post reply

    Love is the corner stone in any true relationship because it unites between two great lovers in truth... Without love, then it's wasting time.............. Our poems depend on our loving of people and things around us.

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