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Allian Bern Fuentes Male, 19, Philippines (5/9/2013 1:26:00 AM)

WHAT I HAVE BECOME

Questions are running in my mind
Should I look behind
Sinking slowly from my tears
Facing alone my fear

It's too late to turn back now
It's so hard to let go somehow
It's too late to wash what you've done
You don't even know what I've become

You promise me a thousand lies
That you'll never say goodbye
But you left me without much reason
So in this empty room I'm alone

Tell me what's left when the edge reaches the end
I'm feeling like dead but in front I pretend
I have a few bullets left for a second to breath
Should I aim this to you or pass this to my head
Cause your name is poisoning the thoughts of my brain
All I hope right now is to forget everything
I won't take any step to erase your mistakes
I hate you more than me and I got nothing left to say

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  • Gogo Amin (5/11/2013 4:25:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    some how some where you will find yourself ask for a wish from your deep heart in your pray to get out of darkness but to turn to white heart is your own question... revenge is the weakest part inside each one! ! can you forgive yourself or others much more in reality without facing famous or ego will stop you to get a long with deep hurt... may be words be weird but many feelings get human get used and hurt himself by sharp things when evil appear in their eyes just like that?is it tragedy that helps you to weak up?or just bad life experience that will make you help who pass beside you to take the same road without one word.. for memory just words.

  • John Paul Cosato (5/9/2013 2:24:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    Allian - I really like your DARK poem. I either like poems that are really dark or uplifting. I do not care to much for anything in between. Keep up the good work. If you want to read a dark poem of mine, check out " Whos in your head" by John Paul Cosato.

    Thx JP

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