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Miley Stephans Sri Lanka (2/1/2013 6:40:00 AM)

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I am but a stranger who is nothing but curious,
read it through and through but for me, your theme did not strike.
would love to know what it is about,
for my beating heart desires.

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  • Rick Adriolo Rookie - 1st Stage (2/3/2013 4:27:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Simply said: the poem sucks if thats the case..
    Not simply said: with a heart that feels nothing, saying " sorry" solves things.. But without meaning and feeling it's the same as saying nothing..

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    • Miley Stephans (2/4/2013 11:28:00 AM) Post reply

      Thanks, for telling me the theme in your poem. I read it again, and it makes perfect sense. Your theme is great. It doesn't suck at all. It's my fault i couldn't get the meaning. I'm saying it again ... more

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