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Lamis Fahal . Female, 19, Sudan, Republic of (9/20/2012 8:56:00 AM)

Hey you all, I would love if you read my new poems and left your comments please! ! !
Here is one

All she wanted is to be wanted

He hugged her and kissed her
And you just looked and stared
I saw that you saw her
And didnt show me that you even cared
You didn't say goodbye
Or a kiss or good luck
Didn't look in my eyes
Didn't you feel there is something I miss
Don't you think that it's tough for that 12 year old
To understand your twisted love
And stand the cold
All that she wanted
Is to feel your warmth
And not feel haunted
By that harshness of yours
She wanted to be loved
And see it in your eyes
She wanted to be hugged
But you left her
With a feeling that never dies
When all that she wanted
Is really to be wanted....

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  • Rookie Lamis Fahal . (9/21/2012 6:38:00 AM) Post reply
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    When there is a lot you can't voice it, then the only way to let out is to word it
    It saves our souls, may be that's why we are expressive :) :)

  • Rookie Sun And Moon (9/21/2012 2:14:00 AM) Post reply

    Nice work :) Teen poetry is always so expressive :)

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