(10/2/2012 12:52:00 PM)
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Hi There Lovely Poets: -)
I wrote this poem about my babies and would love to know what you think. Too sappy?
Mother Of Light
You started as a droplet inside a shell,
Warm, languid, liquid.
Now that safe harbour,
Has turned you into a sea.
To create you, every wonderful thing I've thought,
Every ray of light I've ever seen,
Was harnessed in that single drop.
To nourish...to divide,
Cell by cell
Pouring forward from me,
Toward my ultimate worth.
I didn't know it,
But until that point,
My world had been flat.
You helped me peek over the edge,
We looked into an unfolding universe,
Then you jumped with me!
A galaxy of light and giggles
Radiated through me,
To get to you.
Spirit and Soul,
Light and Hope.
You are so much more
Than an extension
Of my heart or limb.
I am, because of you.
You are, because of me.
Forever bundled in love,
I get to be your Mother.
(10/2/2012 10:47:00 AM)
Hi, I just joined the site and have put 7 poems up so far. When I look on 'Manage my Poems' it says that only three of them are 'online'. Does anyone know what this means?Please read, vote and comment and my poems, it will be much appreciated! I recommend reading 'Teddy Bear'. Thankyou ever so much. I will definitely check out the poems of anyone who comments on mine. :)
(10/2/2012 4:24:00 AM)
I have written a new poem on talents of old people, I want your comments pl
(10/2/2012 4:23:00 AM)
hi poets, I am from Sri Lanka, I do not take long to write a poem, I start and finish it off straightaway
(10/1/2012 6:43:00 PM)
I have several poems on Poem Hunter and think of my self as a tradesman poet. Better poets are artists. But that said I'd love your opinion. You'll find a fair range from, worshipful, children's, humor, and romance.
Please let me know.
(10/1/2012 4:37:00 PM)
Hey you all there poetic party people introducing my brand new poem titled 'i loved you' hope u enjoy the read to the maximum while i enjoys urs too!
Milan Van Zuyen
(10/1/2012 1:56:00 PM)
Hello all you beautiful fellow poets!
I just posted a new poem called 'The Dragon's Bard' if anyone cares to take a look...and rate and comment! Lol I also have other works to browse through as well.
Here's the thing, I'm still fairly new to the site and it means worlds to me to see my work actually being read...and EVEN more so when I see actual rating and read comments on my poetry. (today was the first time I saw that ANY of my poems had been rated...ever. And it was a great thrill to see that! ! !) So please, please, please come check out my writings and feel free to dropp a note! Thank You All!
(10/1/2012 4:43:00 AM)
please dear poets read my first poem and tell me about it. visit my profile
(9/30/2012 12:45:00 PM)
Dear Poets I invite you to read my latest poems both " The love of a mother" and No memories no pictures
Touching the parts of life few are willing to recognize such as
Adoption through the eyes of the child
Adoption through the eyes of the parent
and well real life
All Poems are welcome send me a message with the title of the poem
I would love to read/ comment
(9/27/2012 3:12:00 PM)
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I have a challenge for everybody who is on PoemHunter.com and reads this post: Please write a poem with these guidelines, and submit it online. Then message me, with a copy of the poem: -must be about a real life experience, or real emotions, might be past experience -must be about freedom, not oppression and pain -must be positive -must have the word 'free' OR 'love' OR 'hope' in it -must be at least two verses long
Thank you so much for your participation. I look forward to reading your attempts. GReplies for this message:
(10/2/2012 6:35:00 AM)
hey gwen..this challenge seems simpler and i'm answering this first... THE RISING SUN OF HOPE With the red rising sun Thousands and thousands of hopes arise The red colour symbolises The importa ... more
Joanna E. King
(9/29/2012 4:27:00 PM)
Gwenevere, Here is my submission to your contest. I " hope" you " love" it : -) . Sleepwalking© Come, my love, down rose petal path, Where songbird doth surround. Fill m ... more
(9/28/2012 8:46:00 PM)
Good day. This is my response to your post madame. Hope you like it. A Parable of You Lovely as wonder Clear like water Sun in the morning Stars during evening A rose with dew A flowe ... more
(9/28/2012 12:08:00 PM)
Hello, Gwenevere Cornwell... I accept yo ... more
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