(9/16/2013 1:12:00 AM)
My poem's still waiting for approval... anybody else in the same position or is it just me?
(9/16/2013 12:07:00 AM)
I need your help. This is a competion and I am hoping to win it.
I need alot of rates and comments. '=)
This poem is done with feelings and it will touch anybody who was once or is in love.
You won't regret read it and give me a rate+feedback.
(9/15/2013 7:41:00 PM)
Hello all poets! I would like to ask if you can read my poems and leave any comments. And vote for my poem Don't forget me. Thank you so much. And good luck! to all the poets who have enter the contests!
(9/15/2013 6:05:00 PM)
Hello friends! View my poem for you titled, what is life?Not only for the contest but for you. What does life really means to you?View and criticize it.
Diana Rose Tolentino
(9/15/2013 4:36:00 AM)
It is my first time joining a poetry contest, so please take time to read my entry. God bless us all.
In the prairie down the hill,
I can see the grass so green.
With cascaded flowers everywhere,
And their fragrances fill the air.
As I walk as gentle as the breeze,
Try not to harm life beneath my feet,
Daisies, sweet peas and daffodils,
And crown of laurels in my head.
I felt the wind gently blew my hair,
While dandelions dance in gay.
A big smile painted colors in my face,
As I watch them with such grace.
The feeling just took my breath away,
Surely a place beyond compare.
An honor to be on this blessed soil,
The refuge for any weary soul.
I heard the birds singing just as sweet.
Their hymns lull me back to sleep.
Serene and peace I wont forget,
As I laid my head to rest.
Ogu Henry Chijioke
(9/14/2013 6:09:00 PM)
Let the will of God be done. I am no body. You guys can make me somebody. Thank you and God bless you all
(9/14/2013 4:45:00 PM)
I entered my poem Night Stars in the contest so please read and comment.
Im inspired to write by everyone who has their own personal stories to tell in form of poems.
(9/14/2013 7:24:00 AM)
I have entered poem contest. Please read/rate. Thank you
It is titled " Impalpable dreams"
Hope is the seed I sow to grow a tree of dreams.
Like a waterfall that plunges into abysmal depths I feed it optimism.
Hope blossoms inside the abysmal abyss.
In autumn I harvest my garden which is overflowing with fragrance and colors of impalpable dreams.
(9/13/2013 11:50:00 AM)
please rate my poem good or bad all comments appreciated
Like steam locomotives, it's a tangible breath,
Belching plumes, akin to the heaviest of chain smokers.
Each bud & blade consumed by hungry jack himself
Kissed completely with an ice cold dust
White wash splattered with contempt,
Smother motionless cars that slept sound by night.
Into window corners frost creeps silent,
Embedded with a Dickensian slant.
A milky sun without power to burn,
Relegates itself to a mere shadow caster
And a Scooby-doo mist engulfs the long par three
From weather beaten green too divot strewn tee
This picture painted drowns many a heart in fear
But for myself, it's a pinnacle to round off the year
Crisp chilled air heralds the onset of snow
It’s a perfect topping for a beautiful winter
(9/13/2013 7:57:00 AM)
I loathe my existence.
Can’t stand the picture in the mirror
In my eyes.
My Self in the mirror
In the eyes.
I loathe my presence
Here and now.
And my past future
And my future past.
All lives and livings
Here are together
And I wonder
And I secretly know
All worn out
Loud I quaver
To my inner demons…
What is being after all?