(7/27/2013 12:49:00 AM)
Hello, I am 14 old and have already written several poems, I'd appreciate it if you would comment or rate a few. I believe some people might find them to their liking. They are deep poems and not silly nor happy-go-lucky.
(7/26/2013 6:22:00 AM)
Hi everyone, I invite you to read my poems, I am new to this and would love any feedback as I would like to become a poet in the future. Thanks :)
(7/24/2013 1:51:00 AM)
I don't see any poetry contests???Only people asking to comment and review their poems... I'd really love to enter a contest so if anyone has any info please let me know! :)
(7/23/2013 6:41:00 AM)
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I'm kinda new to this. Please take a look at my poems; I'd love some feedback - good or bad. I really want to become a famous poet :)
I'm 16 (nearly 17) and I'm from England.Replies for this message:
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Klaas Chaos K Senamela
(7/23/2013 4:48:00 AM)
Dear Brothers And Sisters
Can You Please Visit My Poem And Give Me Your Honest Opinion, Lets Support One Another Ladies And Gentlemen. Thanks In Advance
(7/22/2013 11:00:00 AM)
Dear poets and creative minds,
Why don't you have a look at my poetry and review and comment my poems?I would definitely love and welcome your criticism and appreciation of my poetry.
I hope you wouldn't disappoint me in this regard.
(7/21/2013 1:23:00 PM)
dar lagta haii mujhe
is andhere se
aisa kyun ye mujhe
bhi nhi pta
kyun mai ghabrata hun
is andhere kamre mai jaane se
jahan kuch hai hi nhi
aisa kyun ye mujhe bhi nhi pta
malum kr lena chahta hun
mai kya sach hai aur kya jhut
kya koi raaz too ander
nhi pal rha
ye mujhe bhi nhi pta
(7/20/2013 7:04:00 PM)
this is an exorcism, the exo skeloten extractor back with his rexo listen, electro fission disects your molicular texture with this irregular secular mechanism, your diagnosed with uncontrollable scoliosis plus liver cerosis, witness the lyrical, metaphysical master mystical individual of spiritual crafts, i am the sorcerer, vocal recorder,26th century galaxy orbiter, straight from the infinite thought database i tought you how to combine the elements in vats to make pretty red acid, and then i cast it, fast at your dome with a rap never known, perfect cadence of science and math in a poem
(7/20/2013 4:36:00 AM)
mujhe aksar ye mehsoos hota hai
ki mai kuch bhi nhi
mere dil mai aksar
ye bhi khyal ata hai
ki mai hun ya nhi
meri zindagi mujhe
ajnabee si lagne
aur mujhe aksar
ye bhi mehsoos hota
hai ki meri zindagi ka
koi maksad hai bhi yaa nhi..
(7/18/2013 5:12:00 PM)
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What It's Like To Be Me
You don’t know what it is like to be me.
To hear them laugh out loud as others make fun of me.
To see them stare as I walk by.
To hold it all inside and try not to cry.
They go to each others houses and talk on the phone.
I have no one; I am all alone.
My family asks me if I am feeling okay.
I lie, because what would I say?
I haven’t known happiness in a while.
When it’s expected I’ll use that plastic smile.
In my room is the place that I hide.
Sometimes I even contemplate my suicide.
But I am not ready to give up- not just yet.
There is someone for everyone, I try not to forget.
I keep hoping that someone will come my way.
I just hope that day isn’t to far away.
I fear my heart is a portal with a locked door.
Love was inside once but not anymore.
I hope somebody will find the skeleton key.
You just don’t know what it’s like to be me.
(Tuesday, July 16,2013)