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Stan Grossman Stan Grossman Male, 50, United States (3/9/2014 9:46:00 PM)

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There's about a million things that are right and original and humorous about this poem. (Who is the 'I'??) - ('muzzy-eyed inventors'?) Nice job!

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  • ... Dog God 8hate Rookie - 1st Stage (3/10/2014 3:24:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    SiR (Stan?... Jerry?) ... such generous applause rouses. As for the I ...
    it was " I" who knew curious delight in what's (the) mystical; an adulation
    for that hidden voice, ineffable existence in veritable design, and ...
    old, old structures. Those superlative buildings of the past, and
    so imbued with essence, an ancient patina that marvels a reverent
    eye ... and yet, not seen by muzzy-eyed inventors, those whose
    inner eye sleeps. They with such ... poor ... POOR vision, and on
    what's truly germane; and instead, concede to the specious and
    diablerie crime o' compromise ... appropriating energies into
    that ridiculous assumption they hold true, today. Those piteous
    pathetic ... minions of the mundane - modern ... muckworms

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    • Stan Grossman (3/10/2014 7:40:00 PM) Post reply

      Well Dog, you're doing some very interesting and innovative stuff in my opinion. Not easy, but satisfying if the reader is working hard and paying attention. Scotty.

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