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Scarborough Gypsy Female, 37, Australia (4/1/2005 8:27:00 AM)

Hi Everyone,

You may or may not have noticed but I haven't been around much this week. I have been trying my hardest to write this one poem (in free style) and I have spent pretty much every spare minute I've had on it. I am predominantly a rhyming poet and I am trying to master the skills of free style. Anyway, I finaly finished it tonight and have just posted it on the site. I Hope you don't mind me asking this on the forum but I would really appreciate anyone taking a look at it and giving me some honest feedback. Is it trash or treasure? The title is 'Love In A Tea Cup'.

Thanks in advance
Gypsy

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  • Rookie Mary Nagy (4/1/2005 8:40:00 AM) Post reply
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    Hi Gypsy,
    I read your poem (and left a comment) but just wanted to let you know that I absolutely love your poem! ! Trash or Treasure? ? ? Treasure by far! ! You are very talented! ! Sincerely, Mary

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