Poetics and Poetry Discussion

Ok, now... I want you all to ponder the critical message inherent this poem,
it's obligatory for responsible status... I mean, you don't want to be caught
indolent... and on crucial matters... it... makes... me... mad (very) !

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Tall Corn

Say me (you) trenchant?
maybe?but...

i like to swim in clean shallow creeks,
and where fish are small, but birds'...
have long novel-beaks.

and where trees... reprehensibly tall,
turn curious crowning colors, in the fall.
and too, where nature's so dazzling as clean,
due to a clement farmer, so amply mean.

he...

i... plough furrows for corn... and...

large quads


A. L. & i (me... DG)

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Dear PH - could you please start a new forum for reading requests?

Dear Fellow Poets, Cordially invite you to read through my humble contributions and post your most valuable comments.
http://www.poemhunter.com/indranil-bhaduri/

Good Grief! What is this place coming to? It's bad enough that the world can't see eye to eye politically, religiously, etc, but when people you would expect to be civil - minded, creative, intelligent human beings strut their stuff at the expense of others......pretty disgusting. So, watch your backs, people......you never know when yours might be the next obituary posted.

Reverse Entitlement

Nun too bright, the stars tonight
Through fingers old and crinkled fall
Upon deaf ears. The Papist cheers
amidst the weirs of winners.

Her habit broken, her words misspoken,
She genuflects whilst standing tall.
The mass resumes amongst the tombs,
A sonic boom of sinners.

The castouts frown in mudcaked gowns
and wonder at the height of it,
To be cut short at last retort.
Must we abort the caterwaul?

Naw, let it be! It pleases me
To coat my claws in puerile splume
And underthings of things turned green
When all I've seen are none for all.

He is always with you.

..I was very sorry to hear of the recent death of Frank James Ryan Jr. A long standing forum contributor of epic mundaneness, he will nevertheless i’m sure be sadly missed by many here.


Ps, as a special tribute to Frank i’ve added a few redundant adjectives/adverbs etc to the above post…RIP….. FJR

I just received word that Allan Saywell is alive and coming along nicely. Good to hear. -LP

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Say me (you) trenchant?

Maybe...? but...

I like to swim in shallow creeks ...
and where fish are small, and
the birds, they have long-beaks.

And where trees... reprehensibly tall,
turn curious, crowning-colors... in fall ...
and where nature's so dazzling & clean
due to a farmer, that's benevolently mean.

I... plough furrows, for corn....

D G

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Yes yes, " to those next in line." It is my ambition to be interred too, the hATE I ATE has effected
curious recoil, and amongst they of that assumed, and the prevailing design. Ostensibly, and to
a median-mind, my ethos is in question; but to they who realize beyond the mere and specious
cause of mortal men, it's a healthy characteristic. This... ironic virtue... I've nurtured, and for so
so long.

Their naive response, and for so many years, now has me wearied, I am close to spent... and...
AND... (quite) ambitious o'er this concept of interment... hmmm? I am not without hope....

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I pay my tribute to Sir, Herbert Nehrlich! May his soul rest in peace! !