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  • Hola Mentirosa (6/12/2013 3:59:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Looking for a title for this. It was as a result of a friend's comment on a lake District photograph.

    The walkers walk the walk of those before,
    no matter, be they local.... or from far.
    They talk the talk, but not all know the core.
    Not all can see the soil’s inward star.

    The hillside’s and the valleys’ roadside’s gems,
    may punctuate our memories at length?
    They cannot show to all from where it stems.
    They cannot show from where we find the strength.

    The locals and the visitors alike,
    turn blind eyes to the stark reality.
    Can any reconstructed dry-stane dike,
    reflectively, in truth be Quality.

    In some ways we abhor, ”Tourists”’ invasions...
    And yet we all conform to these conservative frustrations?

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  • Angela Gunnell (6/10/2013 12:18:00 PM) Post reply

    Reading " American Isis" , Carl Rollyson's new biography on Sylvia Plath...and so, this seems an appropriate poem to post - and read aloud.

    William Shakespeare (1564-1616)
    from The Tempest

    Ariel's Song

    Come unto these yellow sands,
    And then take hands:
    Curtsied when you have, and kiss'd
    The wild waves whist,
    Foot it featly here and there;
    And, sweet sprites, the burthen bear.
    Hark, hark!
    Bow-wow.
    The watch-dogs bark.
    Bow-wow.
    Hark, hark! I hear
    The strain of strutting chanticleer
    Cry, Cock-a-diddle-dow.

    Full fathom five thy father lies;
    Of his bones are coral made;
    Those are pearls that were his eyes:
    Nothing of him that doth fade,
    But doth suffer a sea-change
    Into something rich and strange.
    Sea-nymphs hourly ring his knell:
    Ding-dong.
    Hark! now I hear them—Ding-dong, bell.

  • Lamont Palmer (6/8/2013 8:05:00 PM) Post reply | Read 4 replies

    Under A Hoodie


    1.
    Outside of windows: deliberate darkness.
    As wide as thought, there comes the briefest time
    on streets of endless cries, when houses
    deign to be spaces that shine and swallow
    Cowls, which hides innocence, unsecured.


    2.
    Running, perpetually into
    The thick of frustrations, tied to a cause,
    They were tragic twins beneath the tutelage
    Of ‘specious’ skies, wrestling with doubt
    Over the voices of intemperate crowds.


    3.
    Many encounters cough up gentle blood,
    on grasses polarized and unable
    to clarify, not saying what mud will reveal.
    Peace is buried with unnamed bruises
    Alone; the way myths enjoy being alone.

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    • Lamont Palmer (6/11/2013 1:49:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

      LOL. OK. I don't consider this 'better' because its less 'ornate'. But thanks for that. I know a little meter and wordplay to you is like Kyrptonite to Superman. You're nothing if not consistent. -LP

    • Jefferson Carter (6/11/2013 12:34:00 PM) Post reply

      Monty, pretty good, less ornate than your usual attempt at " high" art. I always get this sense that you're pushing too hard for profundity, that you won't allow a colloquial phrase or even ... more

    • Lamont Palmer (6/9/2013 8:13:00 AM) Post reply

      Published in Orion Headless. I forget what issue, but in 2012. Tweaked a wee bit since then. -LP

    • Angela Gunnell (6/8/2013 9:55:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

      *grudgingly admits to liking this poem*

  • Donnaj York (6/8/2013 1:49:00 PM) Post reply

    I have no time for, or patience with, the truly insane or the deeply disturbed. Especially those stuck in an inane " I'm-rubber-you're-glue-whatever-you-say-bounces-off-of-me-and-sticks-to-you-demented-childish-mentality" . I have a life to live. Bye-bye looney tooney. You are blocked. If you don't understand this message, then it isn't directed to you.

  • Lee Mack (6/8/2013 2:53:00 AM) Post reply

    the word just came to me
    Jesus has seven names
    they are all mine
    a metaphor a metaname
    worth considering a poetry
    wasted on a seminar

  • Lee Mack (6/8/2013 2:53:00 AM) Post reply

    the word just came to me
    Jesus has seven names
    they are all mine
    a metaphor a metaname
    worth considering a poetry
    wasted on a seminar

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (6/7/2013 8:37:00 PM) Post reply | Read 2 replies

    Erudite Lessons From Cats...{Moon Diamonds}

    Siamese Cats perched on eaves,
    Thai eye's coruscate like diamonds
    [*Wichien-maat (??????????) ],
    just call them..." Moon Diamonds, *

    Sans the slightest movement of vertebrae,
    cyan eye's, poised, fixed,
    ossified like stonework by Keiffer,
    graceful, adroitly mischievous
    unless bristled to madly distemper,
    for then perhaps a catty brush of Dali.

    Creeping o'er and 'round their world
    wherever " THEY" decide it will be!
    Wise, cold-shouldered
    yet they sleep well at night
    beneath Moons warm blanket of spotlight.

    Mornings break brings stretch and folly,
    roaming free, leaping high, focussed
    with those spangled occular almonds
    spanning their vast perimeters
    ostensibly, in defiance of gravities law,
    like moon diamonds.




    *Wichien-maat or (??????????) , is a Thai word which means....." Moon Diamond"
    As the name indicates, the Siamese Cats are said to have hailed from the temples of the Kingdom of Siam, now known as Thailand. This breed of cats became a much sought after cat in several countries. In its native place, the Siamese cat is called a local Thai name which meant “moon diamond.” The Siamese cat looks very sleek and pointy. The parts of its body which are cool have darker shade....Info Source/Wikopedia

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    • Mary Morstan (6/9/2013 5:32:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

      Hi there, " eye's" is not a contraction (that is, you are not shortening a word) : it currently reads " eye is" . On the other hand, it's " Moon's warm blanket" (the moon ... more

    • Angela Gunnell (6/7/2013 11:11:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

      FJR - I like the change I've seen in your recent writing...you have evolved, I believe. Now you know that I don't like your " o'er" and " 'round" ...we've discussed that one befor ... more

  • Allan james Saywell (6/7/2013 12:21:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Adam And Eve Mars And Venice

    Love Is the Brother of need
    Love is the Sister of lust
    Money is the Banker for both
    Hate is the adopted Child
    Of a broken Romance
    A Diamond could buy you Love
    Gold will insure it
    Hope is the agent for success
    Chemistry will buy you time
    Time is worth the wait
    So be in Love
    If you must

    AJS

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    • Emancipation Planz (6/8/2013 8:59:00 AM) Post reply

      Yep... and more locally... in Lennox Heads... do you not answer your phone text now?always within the aroha, Deana

  • Donnaj York (6/6/2013 10:03:00 PM) Post reply

    Please read this young lady's poetry. {- W@king Up -}. Her writings have incredible depth, rhythm, variety, and substance. So young to be so talented.

    To: {- W@king Up -}........ I hope you don't mind this post but your works need to be shared.

  • Allan james Saywell (6/6/2013 7:11:00 PM) Post reply

    I felt a little Queer this morning Martha
    Love can seem so strange Henry- dearest

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