Poetics and Poetry Discussion

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  • Bridgid Patrick (4/21/2005 1:26:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    hi there im very new to this please have a look at my poems and let me know your comments thanks

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    • ***** ***** (4/21/2005 7:46:00 PM) Post reply

      I think you should just write away - you will get votes, but disregard them, and you will get comments, well, take them with a little pinch of salt too.. just produce what you want to - it's your wri ... more

  • Allan James Saywell (4/21/2005 8:53:00 AM) Post reply

    starting all over fritz, posting under different name, it is the poems they are bad, give it away

  • Allan James Saywell (4/21/2005 8:28:00 AM) Post reply

    question how does a poem lose 8 points in fifteen minutes, while you are staring at it, there is a strong pepper mint smell, did sherie give birth to herself

  • Robert Rorabeck (4/21/2005 8:02:00 AM) Post reply | Read 2 replies

    Poetry Hound complimented my aunt who posted the other day- she's a very good poet (otherwise Poetry Hound would not have complimented her, surely) - Any guesses on who she might be- She only has a couple of poems up right now :)

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  • Nobody Dude (4/21/2005 12:53:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    I'm new fairly new at this website and it's 'scoring', and so I suppose I want to offer what some of you call a 'challenge'...if one must score a poem less than a 7 or 8, how about writing a comment to suggest improvements (or at least give a reason) ?

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    • ***** ***** (4/21/2005 7:37:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

      Yes, Rachel, we have all made a statement in one form or another about that damned rating system, and indeed about that damned top500 list, which seems to create monsters in a quest to better even the ... more

  • Nobody Dude (4/21/2005 12:04:00 AM) Post reply

    Perhaps the home is just simple, comfortable, known...unless one has no home. This is my first time on the forum, and I'd like to suggest a poem to be read...'The Traveling Onion' by Naomi Shihab Nye...in which the trivial becomes the profound.

  • ***** ***** (4/20/2005 8:06:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    As I sit in the comfort of my own home... I wonder on another possible challenge... what does 'home' mean to the poet? Pain, history, reconciliation, stasis, happiness or sadness? Another poetry challenge perhaps. What is this 'home' we live in, or perhaps cannot return to?

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  • Allan James Saywell (4/20/2005 7:47:00 PM) Post reply

    well sonja go home

  • ***** ***** (4/20/2005 7:16:00 PM) Post reply

    There is a time in the day when this 'Poetics and Poetry Discussion' forum lives up to its formidable name and does what it says on the tin, but then the moon rises and many fools come out of the shadows.

  • Allan James Saywell (4/20/2005 7:10:00 PM) Post reply

    mark i do know a place where you might be able to get a few tips on
    cummunication skills, they teach you how to better relate to people
    england could have used the same school, i bet you were a problem child
    you could have been a good influence on england, or was he boss of the british connection, you are a right royal little dummy spitter and i am growing tired of your immaturity and lack of sense of humour

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