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  • Rookie John Kay (10/15/2005 4:28:00 PM) Post reply | Read 2 replies
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    'A Lover's Envy' is a hideous poem of the highest order. I agree with Jefferson. I would hope that this shallow, unoriginal, undeserving, cliche choked, sentimental, stale joke of a poem never be thought of as a model or valued in any way. Was this poem reading material recently printed on the backside of a box of hamburger helper, for god's sake. Frankly, I can't believe that we are talking about this poem 150 years after it broke so many hearts. It is nothing short of the enemy of this art form. For years I fought with students who felt that 'anything' anyone wrote was sacred and shouldn't be criticized, that the standards of good poetry writing were all a matter of opinion, and their opinions were as good as anyone elses. I might actually use a poem like this as an example of exactly what not to do if you want to write a good poem. I'm surprised that this one didn't find its feet in cement at the bottom of the Hudson.

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    • Rookie Poetry Hound (10/15/2005 10:57:00 PM) Post reply

      Words of wisdom, John. You hit the bulls eye. Regards.

    • Rookie Herbert Nehrlich1 (10/15/2005 7:47:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

      Personally, I think you are dead wrong.Judging by the standards you appear to espouse where would you place most or all of your poems? In front of some imaginary class as examples of how to be modern ... more

  • Rookie Allan James Saywell (10/15/2005 4:09:00 PM) Post reply

    if you want a poem about a simple person and a simple poem have a read of my
    'simply simple English'

  • Rookie Michael Shepherd (10/15/2005 2:51:00 PM) Post reply

    If Daniel had been less modest and simply asked us to judge his poetry, I think he would have received a warmer reception. Here's a very young chap who's got the sound of poetry in him to an exceptional degree. He's done his homework on poetry, he shapes his poems with care, and his musical, lyrical talent perhaps explains why he picked one of the most lyrical poems of a poet very much of his times, whose lines 3-4 of each verse are not a mile from Gershwin and Cole Porter in their fluent 'dance'.
    He may be a little too 'English' for some Americans - who follow the conventions of their own time also - but for me, he's caught the sound of that particular moment when the very national wit of Betjeman sparked a drier but not dissimilar international wit in Auden - whose echoes can be heard in one or two of Daniel's poems, and all credit to him for that. I sense a fine future for his poetry. See what you think of them, JC and others...

  • Rookie Mary Nagy (10/15/2005 2:44:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    I agree with you Daniel. This is a beautiful poem. I think simplicity IS timeless. We can all relate to the envy he feels...........I love the rhyme! I think there is a real charm to it...to envy those simple, everyday things that get to be a part of his loves life....very beautiful. (I do have rather simple tastes though.) (I admit this.) :) Sincerely, Mary

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    • Rookie Poetry Hound (10/15/2005 4:25:00 PM) Post reply

      Nice to hear you whistling this less narrow-minded tune, Lamont. 'In my opinion' is indeed the key phrase, as opposed to claiming there are 'standards' for what is great poetry

  • Rookie Daniel Tyler (10/15/2005 10:45:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Has anybody ever read 'A Lover's Envy' by Henry Van Dyke. It is quite superb

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  • Rookie Mary Nagy (10/15/2005 7:08:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    HAPPY SWEETEST DAY EVERYONE! (It is Sweetest's Day here today.)

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  • Rookie Gol Mcadam (10/15/2005 7:02:00 AM) Post reply | Read 4 replies

    Help! Does anyone know where I can find an analysis or comment on Dylan Thomas 'Refusal to Mourn the Death, by Fire, of a Child in London'? Maybe I'm thick but I can't make much of it without assistance. Thanks.

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    • Rookie Max Reif (10/15/2005 11:04:00 AM) Post reply

      While we've got the subject up, why NOT 'go gentle into that good night'?

    • Rookie Gol Mcadam (10/15/2005 10:38:00 AM) Post reply

      Thanks for this M & M. Like MS, I thought it might be 'bardic flubber' but, like MR, I was impressed by some of the imagery. I still don't get it - maybe I shouldn't expect to?

    • Rookie Max Reif (10/15/2005 8:38:00 AM) Post reply

      I love the language of the poem, I simply have had difficulty, ever since the poem was taught in my university, digesting the philosophical statement in the last 2 lines. 'and I must enter again the r ... more

    • Rookie Michael Shepherd (10/15/2005 7:35:00 AM) Post reply

      For me, it's close to self-parody of his ... more

  • Rookie Ikazoboh Austine Jeffrey (10/15/2005 6:25:00 AM) Post reply | Read 2 replies

    Have you guys ever thought of writing a poem on food? somebody told me yesterday if i had and i said no. he said; what will you even write about? hamburgers and pizzas? and i replied saying; you are a little punk, i guess you do not know the power of creative thought.

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    • Rookie Max Reif (10/15/2005 8:42:00 AM) Post reply

      I have one called 'Gourmet Love Poem' on my page. (It begins with a phoney quote: 'Menus! *That's* where the poetry's at these days! ') I think if you do a site Subject Search on 'food', you'l ... more

    • Rookie Allan James Saywell (10/15/2005 6:49:00 AM) Post reply

      i have written poems about cabbage, croisants and lots of other eating material you just have to find them

  • Rookie Ikazoboh Austine Jeffrey (10/15/2005 5:36:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    how is poetry viewed down there? Over here only folks who love been alone and reading alot of poetry and prose that know the importance of poetry.

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    • Rookie Max Reif (10/15/2005 8:47:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

      Well, yeah, 'down here' (USA) that's true. Last week someone posted a famous essay by poet Dana Goia called, I think, 'Does Poetry Matter', and Goia's answer, in America, was basically 'no'-that poet ... more

  • Rookie Ikazoboh Austine Jeffrey (10/15/2005 5:10:00 AM) Post reply | Read 2 replies

    when the time comes, i will invent a car that travels more than far, i would go the forest called life, where i would be the eagle and the snakes will be my prey, where i would be feared by many because of my resilience, i would go to the tortoise and come into terms with him but be watchful of his tricks, i would make a way where monkeys do not have to jump from tree to tree.i will do little things that will turn out to be great philosophies and make my reign worth while

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