Poetics and Poetry Discussion

[We walked into the solemn pain ]




The temperature is desperate dusty

Static, sultry, and depressed air


We walked into the solemn pain ,

- - - American poets - Emily, Diegem Sen,



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huge thunder roared, large explosion

Our lives,
From somewhere in the universe,
Where to go.
Our consciousness, can not die, our bodies, can not die
Unwilling to die forever, always unwilling to die.
We do not believe that we will have next life, the afterlife ,

We just hope that our consciousness forever alive, alive.
We just hope that our bodies live forever ,alive.
I have unlimited looking forward to my awareness eternal life,
Never die
My infinite hope my body immortalized,
Never die,

We walked into the solemn pain,
Like elephants, went into the swamps, unable to escape, leaving the swamp

The temperature is desperate dusty,
Static, sultry, and depressed air,
We walked into the solemn pain ,
Cold, huge, boundless desolation, lifeless, cold, heavy desert
Fly to you,


In large yellow desert, A poor weak gray camel, lonely and
Not get any assistance small camel,

No one knows the poor camel, a huge, endless, endless suffering torture, ,
Endless cold, suffocation, heavy pain, depressed ,anguish, fear, trembling, despair, nervousness, restlessness, pestering
lonely camel, like a piece of cloth wrapped around a wounded tree


Endless pain, grief, despair, fear of yellow sand, To the horizon extends past,
Thousands of miles, Miles,
In the boundless Universe filled with
Very majestic pain, despair, fear of storms, thunder, lightning,
Anger growled, roared very majestic pain, despair, fear of storms, thunder, lightning,

This is very majestic, infinite, boundless suffering, despair, fear storm
From
Small camel's hearts,
Generated which is fulls of the Universe,
Shaking

Shaking the Universe, very majestic, infinite, endless pain, despair and fear of the storm, thunder, lightning,
Small camel's cries coming from the storm,
Wailed and sobbed, roaring,
'I infinite hope my awareness of eternal life'
The small camel roaring sound,

More powerful than the storm, the sound of thunder, 'I infinite hope my body eternal life'
This roaring small camel,
From this camel, in the past, know that the death of life is how one thing

This small camel on the future of their own lives,
Produced,
Felt
Despair,

That endless cold, suffocation, pain, depression, anguish ,fear, trembling, despair, nervousness, restlessness, began pestering
lonely camel, like a piece of cloth wrapped around a wounded tree, this camel, in the past, know that the death of the life how it is after

Small camel's hearts, to produce this very majestic, infinite, endless pain, despair, fear of storms, thunder, lightning,
Hideous, horrible, ugly, dark, dark - green lightning
Sometimes appear,
Sometimes disappear
Heavy, cold night, eternal night eternal terror

Like a heavy liquid compressor,

Roaring, roaring,
Pressure to go to the small camel,
Small camels To own the poor soul like a Reed,
Pressure continues,
Such as the the heavy huge mountain,

Pressure to go, pressing the egg to an egg,
We walked into the solemn pain.

Our lives,
From somewhere in the universe,
Where to go.
Our consciousness, can not die, our bodies, can not die

Unwilling to die forever, always unwilling to die.
We do not believe that we will have next life, the afterlife ,

We just hope that our consciousness forever alive, alive.
We just hope that our bodies live forever ,alive.
I have unlimited looking forward to my awareness eternal life,

Never die
My infinite hope my body immortalized,

Never die,

We walked into the solemn pain,
Like elephants, went into the swamps, unable to escape, leaving the swamp,


The temperature is desperate dusty
Static, sultry, and depressed air
We walked into the solemn pain
Dickinson ah, this is the history of my despair,
I despair of history of extremely long,


Than the Austrian writer Franz Kafka
Famous despair long
Cold, heavy death, the shadow of terror

Twenty years,
Torture,
Squeezing my

Thinner than a piece of paper the soul,
We walked into the solemn pain.

Heavy, cold night, eternal night, eternal, boundless terror, the shadow of death,
Like a heavy liquid compressor,
Roaring, roaring,

Pressure to go to the small camel,

Crushed my lonely heart
I was poor

Small camel, I was poor Small camel, I was poor Small camel, I was poor Small camel, I was poor Small camel, I was poor Small camel, I was poor Small camel,
Twenty years,
My broken heart has been bleeding,
No one knows I'm suffering,

No one can save me,
Since the cold, dark, heavy pain, fear,
In the depths of despair,
No one can save me from the cold, dark, heavy pain , fear,
The depths of despair, dear Diegem Sen,

Since I do not yield
Disobedience to such a fate - - -
This is the fate of the human,
People told me,
People said to me, this is the fate of the people,
A person born in the world after- -

Continue to this person
Own
Cemetery walk
This fate, the fate of this man,
Let my spirit
Very nervous,

Anxiety, panic, my nerves
Be
Winch
Stretched tight grip and tight
Perhaps who a sigh,
Let my nerves fracture,
We walked into the solemn pain.

rebellion ah,rebellion ah,
I don't like such a man, he denies life,
Resistance, resistance
That covered the sky
Tall, vast, huge Tibetan Plateau
Himalayas,

Be
I solemnly pain and sorrow, I'm not a fatalist,
My
Will, incomparable desired my consciousness.
Body have eternal life

This supreme, the highest happiness, happiness
I never allow my consciousness, the body, the will, like a flowers were put flames
Be put into the graveyard,
We walked into the solemn pain.


Our lives,
From somewhere in the universe,
Where to go.
Our consciousness, can not die, our bodies, can not die
Unwilling to die forever, always unwilling to die.
We do not believe that we will have next life, the afterlife ,

We just hope that our consciousness forever alive, alive.
We just hope that our bodies live forever ,alive.
I have unlimited looking forward to my awareness eternal life,

Never die
My infinite hope my body immortalized,

Never die,

We walked into the solemn pain,
Like elephants, went into the swamps, unable to escape, leaving the swamp


The temperature is desperate dusty
Static, sultry, and depressed air
We walked into the solemn pain ,

I have in the past twenty years ago,
Writing a prose
Although clumsy
But expressed
My sincere sorrow,
I do not let myself get vanity,

Deliberately falsified grief, and,
Singing the voice of my heart -
I unlimited
Incomparable desire of my consciousness, the body, will be able to get eternal life, in a prose,



Although the
I asked my best friends - the smartest,
The wisest people
At the time, asked a lot of people,
But no one
Told me that people can not die.
Therefore,

Tears in my prose, and sincere grief,
Like the night, like the fragrance of flowers,
Like the sound when the flowers open, as honey,
Flowed
Some of my early years
The heart of a friend,

Flowed
The early years of Sichuan University

Some postgraduate heart,
These graduate students, learn German classical philosophy,

At that time, I was very moved, my heart was very warm, happy,
Like from the hypnotic magic of winter
Wake up
A big tree
Has been

Sweet kiss beautiful goddess of spring,

That was very warm and happy
These graduate, praised
My prose is very good, and a smile

With warm
Cordial hand, shook my hand,
At the time, I do not know how to graduate to do so,
Is great,
People
Not easy to get the honor to me,
Graduate students doing

Is yes, support, praise,
I am sincere, bold
The pursuited of eternal life,
I only remember Graduate,

And others,
Not to

I said that people can not die,
My mind just is not calm,
Just calm
Just roaring

Screaming
Resistance is not fair
People's fate - -
After the birth of a person in the world, is constantly towards his own grave,

This is
I will never
Unwilling to accept the people's fate,
Unfair, brutal fate -
A
After the birth of the world,



This person is constantly towards his own grave,
We walked into the solemn pain.
After I visited those graduate students,
In my mind, the infinite,
Incomparable
Longing for my consciousness, the body can receive eternal life,

This
Desire infinitely bright
A beautiful waves of life,
Never stopped roaring, noise,
After that more than 10 years,


Our lives,
From somewhere in the universe,
Where to go.
Our consciousness, can not die, our bodies, can not die

Unwilling to die forever, always unwilling to die.
We do not believe that we will have next life, the afterlife ,
We just hope that our consciousness forever alive, alive.
We just hope that our bodies live forever ,alive.
I have unlimited looking forward to my awareness eternal life,

Never die

My infinite hope my body immortalized,

Never die,

We walked into the solemn pain,
Like elephants, went into the swamps, unable to escape, leaving the swamp
Cold, huge, boundless desolation, lifeless, cold, heavy desert
Fly to you,


In large yellow desert, A poor weak gray camel, lonely and
Not get any assistance small camel,
No one knows the poor camel, a huge, endless, endless suffering torture, ,
Endless cold, suffocation, heavy pain, depressed ,anguish, fear, trembling, despair, nervousness, restlessness, pestering
lonely camel, like a piece of cloth wrapped around a wounded tree



Endless pain, grief, despair, fear of yellow sand, To the horizon extends past,
Thousands of miles, Miles,
In the boundless Universe filled with
Very majestic pain, despair, fear of storms, thunder, lightning,
Anger growled, roared very majestic pain, despair, fear of storms, thunder, lightning,

This is very majestic, infinite, boundless suffering, despair, fear storm
From
Small camel's hearts,
Generated which is fulls of the Universe,
Shaking

Shaking the Universe, very majestic, infinite, endless pain, despair and fear of the storm, thunder, lightning,
Small camel's cries coming from the storm,
Wailed and sobbed, roaring,
'I infinite hope my awareness of eternal life'
The small camel roaring sound,

More powerful than the storm, the sound of thunder, 'I infinite hope my body eternal life'
This roaring small camel,
From this camel, in the past, know that the death of life is how one thing

This small camel on the future of their own lives,
Produced,
Felt
Despair,

That endless cold, suffocation, pain, depression, anguish ,fear, trembling, despair, nervousness, restlessness, began pestering
lonely camel, like a piece of cloth wrapped around a wounded tree, this camel, in the past, know that the death of the life how it is after

Small camel's hearts, to produce this very majestic, infinite, endless pain, despair, fear of storms, thunder, lightning,
Hideous, horrible, ugly, dark, dark - green lightning
Sometimes appear,

Sometimes disappear
Heavy, cold night, eternal night eternal terror
Like a heavy liquid compressor,
Roaring, roaring,

Pressure to go to the small camel,
Small camels To own the poor soul like a Reed,
Pressure continues,
Such as the the heavy huge mountain,

Pressure to go, pressing the egg to an egg,
We walked into the solemn pain.

Dear Diegem Sen,
Later, I understand,
Is swept through the the Chinese earth's whirlwind - - -
The whirlwind of the Chinese Cultural Revolution,

Ancient belief in the Chinese land - - -
To God
Of faith and the immortality of the soul,
By human ancestors invention
Let
People
Able to survive

Unlimited warmth of faith
Like dead leaves
Swept into the dustbin of history.
So I'm on this world,
The strongest love
His own life

I,
Never wanna
To give up his life for me,
2/3 of my youth
Era,
Is Dim
No light,
Like a fall,
In the universe


Dead
In the dark shooting star,
We walked into the solemn pain.
Now my faith immortal
Nature goddess
Since the natural world of all life,
From the myriad of things and myriad people,

Like autumn moon, happy, sweet.
I really do not want anyone
Like I used to, day after day,
Month after month, year after year,
Forever,

By his own solemn pain

Wave of despair, fear,
Never stop beating their mind,
Like the wrath of the waves of the sea,
Slapping hard Coast,


Our lives,
From somewhere in the universe,
Where to go.
Our consciousness, can not die, our bodies, can not die

Unwilling to die forever, always unwilling to die.
We do not believe that we will have next life, the afterlife ,
We just hope that our consciousness forever alive, alive.
We just hope that our bodies live forever ,alive.
I have unlimited looking forward to my awareness eternal life,

Never die

My infinite hope my body immortalized,

Never die,

We walked into the solemn pain,
Like elephants, went into the swamps, unable to escape, leaving the swamp,

Dear Emily, Diegem Sen
I'm willing, really willing,
Inspired by you

I sing this song of the soul,
Able to comfort Unfortunately - - -
That comfort

Like me as before in the desperate situation in the people,
The comforting yet to believe in God

And the immortality of the soul,
Thank you so much, I really thank you, Emily, Diegem Sen

You inspired me, inspired me,
I sing my soul tragic history [despair,
Pain, sadness History,

My lonely heart
Forever in heavy cold
Dark
Boundless despair of death, pain, terror
Abyss groaned

Struggling

Revolt History]
I would like to be able to
Make this tragic history
Into a sweet pleasant song
[Gods
Would like sweet pleasant song, I believe]


Ah, that buzzing bees
Is kissing a fragrance, beautiful Corolla
Let the beautiful rainbow envy, jealousy Corolla,
I compiled the Corolla,
Girls kissing beloved lover
Crowned it, come on, come on,

Dear Diegem Sen,
I was For me Diegem Sen,
Wear a Corolla,



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2013,3,1,17,47

The wait has been killing me


This game

has drained

the life

from me

slow suicide

knowing

what comes next

I wait to feel

the razor

the pain

and welcome

it’s sting

I have been

waiting

now for years

and the time

finally draws nigh

the wait

has been

killing me

Always

I am not jealous
of what came before me.

Come with a man
on your shoulders,
come with a hundred men in your hair,
come with a thousand men between your breasts and your feet,
come like a river
full of drowned men
which flows down to the wild sea,
to the eternal surf, to Time!

Bring them all
to where I am waiting for you;
we shall always be alone,
we shall always be you and I
alone on earth,
to start our life!
Pablo Neruda

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