Rhythm and Rhyme Workshop
Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black
(10/26/2008 6:22:00 PM)
I agree with you Albert.It's very difficult to keep rhymes going even with a rhyming dictionary.I've written some semi-lyrical poems including THE BUGS OFNATURES ECONOMIC PICTURE but I feel the words are more important...that's what happened my 'Sonnet' The Siren Sings To A Sailor, I intended it to be a sonnet but I couldn't rhyme two of the lines without ruining my poem.Make every word count-the idea and its execution is more important.Good luck
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