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Tiyler Durden Male, 40, Netherlands (4/4/2006 6:13:00 AM)

My rhyme

I hate the polish pizza man
I raped his dog inside my van
I like my toast
with a side of ham
I raped the polish pizza man

I hate the one-legged paper boy
I raped his ear with an almond joy
I beat off to the real McCoy
I hate the one-legged paper boy



now comes the point where I need help...
the rules are simple-first you put who you hate
-then you put what you raped
-then you put something that is irrelevant to the whole thing
-end it with the first line
-be as disgusting and vile as possible

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  • Rookie Nicholas Mcdonough (7/5/2006 3:27:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply
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    How long did you think you could go on plagerizing people from immortal before you got caught?

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    • Rookie Nicholas Mcdonough (7/5/2006 3:39:00 PM) Post reply

      http: //www.immortal.com/bbs/YaBB.cgi? board=naughtypoetry; action=display; num=1048001497 Yet another poem plagiarized by you.

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